Writing Feedback / Advantages and Disadvantages of using Machines? [2]

In today's society, more and more work is done by machines. Do you think the positive effects of the development outweigh the negative effects on individuals and society?

It is true that more and more work is done by machines. Although this may have some drawbacks, I believe that the benefits are greater than the disadvantages.

On the one hand, there are several disadvantages of doing work by machines. Firstly, this trend have negative effect on traditional handicrafts. For example, products made of rattan and bamboo are replaced gradually by plastic furnitures . Secondly, there is less social interaction when working with machinery. Workers may focus only on their machines instead communicate with other people. Finally, it encourages the laziness of workers because they tend to depend on machines. People are unwilling to finish their job by hand because they know there are other convenient ways.

However, I think that these disadvantages are negated by the advantages. Primarily, the advantage is that machines can improve the productivity of the work because it can work faster and more efficient than people. Machines can do work without any tiredness while people become tired after activity for some hours. Another advantage is that machines can help people to manufacture the items of products accurately and delicately. Machines are designed to produce the exact same products but it is difficult for people to do that. Furthermore, machines can lessen the negative effects of shortage of human resources.

In conclusion, although doing work by machines is not completely beneficial but it have many advantages. Machines can help us to do our works faster, better, and safer than do them by hand.

Writing Feedback / Should the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices? [3]

Topic: Some people suggest that government should introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices to ensure public health. Others say it's wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer:
It is sometimes claimed that controlling nutrition and food choices to ensure public health is wrong. Personally, I support this view although some people may hold a contracy opinion.

On the one hand, it is reasonable for the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices. The clearest advantage of this is ensuring the food eaten by people is always heathy. This help people avoid eating food containing too much sugar, carbonhydrates and cholesterol which have negative effects on heart diseases. Another benefit is that providing instructions about healthy diet for people, leading to enables people to have consistent eating habits. Many parents give their children too much choices of food but too little guidance in what should to eat.

On the other hand, I believe that it is wrong for the government to control what people eat. Firstly, people have right to choose food which they want to eat. The government cannot force them to eat what they do not like. Secondly, this action may reduce the food choices of people. Each people have different eating habit so they always choose different food. Finally, this action causes deterioration in the food business development. This action do not allow to produce all the kinds of food which satisfy the demand of people, resulting in lossing many business chances.

In conclusion, although controlling nutrition and food choices have some benefits, I firmly hold the view that people should be free to choose what they want to eat.