Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 : Effects of Technology on people's relationship. [9]

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Technology Affecting Social Life?

Technological achievements are the explicit evidences proving that human beings is the most intelligent on the Earth. From being born, technology has changed a lot and this does have much affects the way people get in touch with each other and in my opinion, It's altering in the positive way.

In the past, it was very difficult for us humans to contact others. It used to take usually 3-4 days to convey a mail to the recipient through the post office's service. So there were a lot of problems which couldn't be resolved immediately. But nowadays, with the advances of technology such as the Internet, mobile phone, we can get in touch with our relatives, friends, colleagues so much more easily. Though the distance may be a half of equator's length, we can e-mail or call up to our acquaintances just in a moment. Besides, we can know what our friends are feeling through their statuses on Facebook or Twitter. We hence cheer with them or console them, depending on the contents of what they have write before. Clearly, the technology is making our relationship closer and closer.

Through the technological inventions, we can easily make friends with others in the world, even they're very far from us. Of course, with the each other's introduction on some social websites., we could know a little about the hobbies or ideals of the person whom we intend to contact. So it may be easier to create a new relationship. For instance, when I started intending to take IELTS, I shared my determination on facebook and I know some new friends who are struggling for the best results in the upcoming test. We exchanged ideas and becomed very close friends. Once a week, we organize a offline meeting to earnestly practice English speaking. It seems to be very effective.

Unsuspiciously, the evolution of technology has influenced the tie between us a lot. It's tighter and tigher when we use in the good way. Thanks to the devotion of the inventors and what they have devised to the human beings.

Writing Feedback / The more and more importance of Practical skills [3]

TOPIC : In today's job market it's far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

MY ESSAY :
Nowadays a lot of recruiters estimate that the workers who have just graduated from university lack the practical skills to suit the jobs. As a student, I think it's actually precise and certainly in the near future wee will look back and realize that practice is surely the necessary requirement of any jobs, or rather we won't follow the superficial value of the certificate paper anymore.

It's the fact that practical skills are very important in today's job market. Apparently, should the students only study the theory, they can't understand why they learn it and all they will usually do is trying to learn lessons by rote to pass the exams. Eventually they get nothing. For instance, our community offers the doctors lots of experiences to treat the patients well, but the medical university usually too much concentrate on the theoretical education. This causes that the graduate doctors can't deal with the urgent cases although they study for a long time. What is the consequence of this ?

In the future, with the hindsight, it's surely that we will reduce the formal qualification. A very sad state in Vietnam now is that people here focus on the degree so much that they forget the real qualification of education. This causes that there're a lot of nominal professors, but it lacks the skillful workers. I think there will be more vacational schools built in some next decades and the educational system in Vietnam will have to appreciate the practical skills as the position they deserve.

In conclusion, it's clearly that we will have to educate the students more practically, not too much theoretically like in the present. And of course, this trend will affect beneficially our society one day.