Writing Feedback / a Table about proportion of female & male genders in sports [5]

The table provides information about proportion of both genders who took part in sport acting during approximately one month in U.K around 2002. The company was made between five different sport categories.

Overall, participation of men in these five various types of extreme sports were much greater than women. For instance, the boys participants in Cue sports were five times the number of girls participants. Moreover, compare with the percentage of females, more than twice as many males participated in cycling. Although over 50% male-genders involved in one activity or more, female-genders involving in it was considerable high also (around 50%).

Exceptionally, average of girls in Yoga and keeping fit sports were far greater than average of boys who involved in it. At the bottom of the list, swimming proportion for both genders was almost similar. Same pattern was seen in Walking-sports. Undoubtedly, involvements of men in extreme sports were mostly common rather than women.

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