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Name: faraz Shamsi
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farazshamsi   
Jan 24, 2015
Writing Feedback / Spending for space Project is Justify, other consider to be useless. [3]

Many people think that the government should spend money to explore life in the outer space, while others think that it's a waste of public money. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and examples.

Our present state must dedicate too much money for the research of space project in our country, however it is futile for spending excessive amount of money on such research because it is public money. Public opinion is divided as one is supporting and other against it. I am agree that spending the money for this project is not sublime.

There are many obvious disadvantage for usage of money in this project. Firstly and foremost, such space project is quite expensive and risky because it takes too much time to complete such project. As a result cost will be double due to delay. Secondly, pupils deprived of basic facilities in our country, if the government invest too much money in the space mission. Such as education and health are neglected by the government due to this project. Lastly, public money of tax prayer must be distribute to those people who have paid the tax instead of exploration of space development.

On the other hand, some member of the society think that such space venture is always to be beneficial and lucrative for the technology perspective because it can faster our communication with low cost. For instance, satellite medium is prominent example for space project. Furthermore, such research do provide an alternate solution to live in the planet instead of earth. As the land is scarce which we do not enough space to live for the pupil. For instance a Mars planet where people can live as scientist prove them.

To conclude, spending government money on the space exploration is not wisely decision as it must be used for other purpose such as remove the poverty. On balance, my personal opinions that disadvantage of extra money for space outweigh the advantage.
farazshamsi   
Jan 24, 2015
Writing Feedback / Online Shopping increase in our daily life [2]

Our present globalization takes online shopping as one of significant tool for the economy system. however, public opinion is divided into two views: one supporting it and one against it. Both approaches have their own plausible argument, so it is necessary to analyze them carefully. I would Prefer online due to the following reasons:

There are many advantages of online shopping in our world. firstly and foremost, it save time to the people because the online shopping is available any time. Such as, people can easily do shopping at midnight without any difficulty. Secondly, comparison is easily done with the online shopping. People can easily be compare with other products from other website. Therefore, they get low Price. Lastly, people do online shopping without any obstruction. This is seem to be true, because the sales person in the market often force the customer to buy the products and some times may change their decision of the customer.

On the other hand, some members of the believe the delivery of item which is bought from online shopping is quite late. Sometimes the delivery charges are more than the Product which is bought online. Such as, Purchasing of any heavy machine from online where loaders and Transport would be require . Hence, cost will be increase for delivery. Secondly, people deprived of job in the market. There is no need for sales persons to promote and sales. Finally, people could lose their money when they do online shopping .Online theft is very frequent in developed world. For Example in Unites state and England.

To conclude, online shopping has been gradually increased over the recent decade particularly in developed countries. On the balance, it is my personal opinion that advantages of online shopping are slightly outweigh the disadvantages.
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