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Name: Lara Bernal
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Lbernal11   
Mar 4, 2015
Writing Feedback / Bad news in the media? Just to make money and to gain popularity. [3]

Something that I noticed right away is that you will want to use clearly organized paragraphs. I will help you to get it organized. :-)

FromOver the past few decades, newspaper and television hasve become popular media for infor mation broadcasting.Instead of information broadcasting, you may want to say that the media has become popular for providing the news, both negative and positive. Although we have all types of incidents happening in the world, decisions are takenmade by editors to present in newpaper based on monetary benefits and to popularizechoose what is put in newspapers and on the news in order to gain monetary benefits and popularity . From the past experiences people feel that more bad news werewas printed than the good onesnews . You may want to provide where you received this information/fact.AlsoHowever,there is a feeling among many that good news will change the people thoughts to be positive.good news may help the population to feel and think more positively.

First,ly the famous newspapers dinakaran,dinamalar and straittimes You should capitalize the names of the newspapers project bad incidents like robb ery, politicians looting people's money, and rape incidents.It is rarely seen It is rare that good news like new developments works by the government, achievements by young people in the fields of S cience and T echnology, and sports coming are run as headlines. One of the main reasons has been the editors of the paper who decides how the newspaper should look like deciding how the newspapers should look.The main motivation behind this type of decision is capital gain.

secondlyNext,the television which has become mandatory things at home for connecting to the outside world. The television makes it easier to be exposed to more bad news. A trend has been set by editors and tvthe media people to present more unplea sent news than good news .Popularization the tv of particular television channels and hence are gaining good control of people. Furthermore,and wealth had beenseems to be a strong motive for people who run the media .

Finally,people are not educating themselves about the reality of what is happening in the world, so they wind up receiving and believing incorrect information.getting informed about the good happenings and hence they are getting motivated in a wrong direction.The development works(Not sure what you mean by this) by government and achievements by students and normal people are not reaching the majority of the public because of this. To conclude form from the above facts, that, the basicmain motivation behind the media are people who want to make money and gain popularity. people and news paper editors are to make money and to gain popularity. These medias are not only making people criminals, but also demotivating the public by broadcasting bad news. I strongly believe that spreading goodpositive news to people will surely motivate them to achieve for their owntheir goals and also for thehelp theircountry. It would also help to seed (spread?) moral value for the whole community and world.
Lbernal11   
Mar 9, 2015
Essays / Significant quote that made an impact on you - suggestion for content of the essay question [4]

What quote were you thinking of using? I would suggest something along the lines of having integrity. Since you cannot refer to finance itself, or your career goals, you may want to choose a quote that has to do with having integrity since you will be dealing with money and possibly people.

I am not sure what the length of this paper is, but once you choose your quote, I would explain what the quote means to you and what the quote is trying to tell others in the introduction; explain why it's special. Then you could make each body paragraph about times that this quote inspired you (one-two paragraphs), it's relevance to your life (another one-two paragraphs), and significance in your life (another one-two paragraphs).

This is just a suggestion.
Here are some good quotes about having integrity and living your life with honor:
"Rather fail with honor than succeed with fraud." Sophocles
"Real integrity is doing the right thing, know that nobody is going to know whether you did it or not." Oprah Winfrey
"It is better to deserve honors and not have them than to have them and not deserve them." Mark Twain
I hope this helps.
Lbernal11   
Mar 9, 2015
Poetry / "Ode on a Grecian Urn" - Assisting in writing a regular ode poem. [4]

Just a few questions... how long does the poem have to be?
Also, is it supposed to follow a certain rhyme scheme?
I feel like the best way to go with ode poems, especially if you are not an experienced poet, is to write it in praise of a person. Poems can be challenging and I feel like if you write about someone you care about or love, it flows easier. I can help more if you answer those two questions. :-)
Lbernal11   
Mar 9, 2015
Undergraduate / 19th century novels, knitting patterns from the 1930s; Applicant Statement for Living History Museum [2]

I am writing in response to the S ummerI nterpretation I nternship at Old Sturbridge Village. Since childhood, I have been fascinated by history...
... elaborate recreations of 19th century American life on the E ast C oast. Being a part of such an experience ...

In a living history museum setting I believe I have much to contribute. I believe I have much to contribute in a living history museum setting. I have experience working with animals, both in a museum setting and in an animal shelter. (I would tell more about your experiences with animals instead of going right to your studies). While my specialty is not in American H istory, studying international relations (If International Relations was your major, I would capitalize that). has given me a broad understanding ...

I feel that by understanding the modes of existence before the I ndustrial R evolution, and the changedchanges that occurred after, I would be better prepared to doperform work in parts of the world that have ...
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