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Posts by maryla
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maryla   
Mar 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / Forcing visitors to behave like host country would not bring anything new - no good changes for host [3]

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and
behavior .Others disagree and think that host country should welcome cultural
differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


These days due to the increasing number of turists around the world,there is a number of heated discussions of whether visitors to other countries should obey cultural rules and traditions of the destination country or not.In my observation,it would be a great opportunity to learn from both parties culture.However,in this essay I discuss both point of views.

To begin with,considering the point that when people step into a new country they do not leave behind all they've learnt before and their culture,is crucial.Each country has special traditions and behavioral rules and this can effect on the host counrty as turists go there.As a result local people believe that their society lose its balance and integration by combining visitor's culture with local tradition and social rules.And this leads to more misunderstanding and in long term make governing the country cope with many problems.So the cons believe that to prevent upcoming multicultrual problems,it is better to encourage visitors to behave and obey their local cultural rules.

In contrast, there is a huge group of people who consider the subject as chance to improve and update culture by learning positive points of foregin visitors traditions.This would be a excellent practice to increase the communication skills,tolarnce and empathy.Moreover,visitors could help the host country to learn uncommon points of views and communicationg with visitors from other countries in some words is like traveling around the world without leaving the house.

To sum it up,as I see the issue,forcing visitors to behave like host country would not bring anything new and can not help to positive changes to the host.By opening the arms to new cultures host could benefit from them by experiencing new aspects of life and could help to borden thei horrizons.
maryla   
Mar 22, 2015
Writing Feedback / Kids who are not born with some sort of abilities and skills can be as successful as talented one [3]

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Believing that people are born with certain skills and talents has a long pedigree.Overtime,by dicovering more about human brain and behaviors,some experts declare that people can gain many skills in different fields such as sport and music by being trained from young age and childhood.

In the past there were many talented who could play sport or a musical instrument without being taught and these examples made us believe that to be good at sports or to be a good musician, it needs to have the skill in our DNA. The main root of this belief was the lack of information about human and his abilities to learn.By the time passing,scientists have tried to find if there are other factors which can effect on human learning proccess and the amount of time that should be dedicate to train a child be a specialist on any type of acitivity like sport or music.

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