Undergraduate / Common App Essay: The Morning of Foamy Tears [6]

My eyes felt so refreshed and cold, like the sensation of having water on top of mints < This is a little unclear , and I realized that I did it I'd done it. I'd finally combatted my childhood fear. This somewhat traumatic yet interesting experience taught me a very simple lesson in a unique way: a fear is just another hindrance obstructing my view - another barrier straining my focusthis also should be rephrased . Facing them vague word choice is always hard, whether it is being at heights, killing a spider or speaking in publicthis whole list is awkward .

Undergraduate / Intellectually-rich culture and traditions such as the Scav Hunt - Why UChicago Essay [6]

To me, children are the ones who are the innovative thinkers.