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Posts by mennaemad
Name: Menna Emad El-Shater
Joined: Jan 25, 2016
Last Post: Jan 29, 2016
Threads: 2
Posts: 3  
From: Egypt
School: the Egyptian american international school

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mennaemad   
Jan 25, 2016
Undergraduate / Psychology and sociology fields. How will studying in the American University in Cairo benefit me? [3]

Education is a very important factor and step towards success, in order for someone to exceed in life one must, for starters, have a proper education. While heading out to university , I am not just going to be leaving high school , no , I'll be leaving a stage in my life that had a certain style and system and I'll be moving to a harder stage in my life with different rules , contents and expectations.

Ever since I was a little girl, studying at the American university in Cairo has been a dream for me and my mother. I remember how when I was little she used to talk to me about the university and how it'll be a different world full of important and interesting experiences and high quality education . Later as I started growing up, I started leaning towards certain fields that only the American university in Cairo could offer me in very high quality, these fields being psychology and sociology. This university has always been the epitome of a successfully well-built arts university, one that presented and offered the right forms of various liberal arts fields of studying. What gave me the greatest push to pursue majoring psychology in the American university in Cairo was the great number of highly educated and well-trained professional professors that will be teaching the right techniques and necessities of this certain field I'm pursuing. The faculty members of the psychology department at the American university in Cairo clearly show extreme success and prosperity, taking in consideration the previous graduates' feedbacks and evaluating the amount of knowledge they have absorbed from their 4 years at the American university in Cairo. When I see myself going further in my psychology career in the future, I see myself doing this in only one way and it is to have a proper , inspiring , and well-built skills that I think could only be obtained in my opinion from the effective and updated education being offered in the American university in Cairo.

I believe that the American university , will be able to offer me not only the high quality education that I'm looking for , no , it will also offer me great experiences that will lead me through life after college. I think that studying psychology at the American university in Cairo will not only benefit me educationally but it will aid in the prosperity of my career afterwards.
mennaemad   
Jan 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / TV programs, which contain extreme force action, hold negative effects on children's interaction [2]

hello , your essay seems to have mostly all the right ides about the topic . but mainly the essay is lacking correct grammatical structure and it is also lacking any solutions to the problem that you are addressing. i would prefer if you corrected the grammatical mistakes that you ad , and provide a clear solution to the negative side of your argument.
mennaemad   
Jan 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Changes in the proportion of different people who visit Zoo, Library, Theatre, and Cinema [2]

Hello, i quite understand the structure of your essay , and i clearly see that it is highly build on research . but to be honest what i didn't particularly prefer about the essay ,that it wasn't running very smooth , it was basically stating information. i believe that your essay must include why certain results are the way they are , explain the results of the data you are resulting . go deeper in your essay not just mere research, try to explain why the high percentage in different fields vary from country to country or from culture to culture? also try to see how visiting the theatre was in the early ages very important and compare it to the present day , while still of course putting in consideration the data you got out of your research.
mennaemad   
Jan 29, 2016
Undergraduate / How can I benefit from education at AUC? The epitome of a successfully well-built arts university. [3]

Education is a very important factor and step towards success, in order for someone to exceed in life one must, for starters, have a proper education. While heading out to university , I am not just going to be leaving high school , no , I'll be leaving a stage in my life that had a certain style and system and I'll be moving to a harder stage in my life with different rules , contents and expectations.

As I started growing up I started leaning towards a certain field that only the American university in Cairo could offer me in very high quality, this field being psychology. I found my interest in psychology because I noticed that studying an individual's cognitive behavior and analyzing their attitudes was such an interesting topic and goes very well with my characteristics, taking in consideration that I'm the kind of character that loves listening to people and analyzing their reactions to the different situations we're being put through in life. I chose the American university in Cairo not only for its high quality education and it's widely known reputation, no, I chose the American university in Cairo for the opportunities it offers and its uniqueness in the way it educates generations after generations. The American university in Cairo offers various opportunities such as the graduates exchange and study abroad program, which I believe could benefit me in pursuing my career in psychology by adding, to my experience through interacting with new people and new characters that will add to my knowledge and to my learning new methods and researches from different perspectives and cultures. And so through this program I'll be able to expand my opportunities and skills concerning the field I chose; psychology. Moreover, what also contributed to my choice of the American university in Cairo was the great number of highly educated and well-trained professional professors that will be teaching the right techniques and requirements of this certain field I'm pursuing. The faculty members at the American university in Cairo clearly show extreme success and well built education, taking in consideration the previous graduates' feedbacks clearly state that professors were very understanding to their student's situation and they try to help them through only enforcing what's better for the student and nothing more. When I see myself going further in my psychology career in the future, I see myself doing this in only one way and it is to have a proper , inspiring , and well-built skills that I think could only be obtained in my opinion from the effective and updated education being offered in the American university in Cairo.

This university has always been the epitome of a successfully well-built arts university, one that presented and offered the right forms of various liberal arts fields of studying. I believe that the American university , will be able to offer me not only the high quality education that I'm looking for , no , it will also offer me great experiences that will lead me through life after college. I think that studying psychology at the American university in Cairo will not only benefit me educationally but it will aid in the prosperity of my career afterwards.
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