Writing Feedback / The main goal of universities: to link students for their own value or prepare them for a future job [2]

some individuals believe that the primary goal universities should be to provide information and skill needed for future work. others however feel that the main objective of universities is to give students access to knowledge for its own values regardless if the information is useful for a job or not.

what, in your opinion, should be the primary objective if university education? give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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main goal of universities is to offer information and skill required for work-force. The others think the purpose of universities is to give students link for their own value without worrying about the information useful or not. In my opinion, i argue with the second statement that knowledge is not only for looking a job but it can be more than it.

University is not only learn about the major that we have taken. But it also a process to make our mind have a wide-view. In university, we learn about theory, practice, competition and many more. It can be applied in our life. Knowledge that university give to us is not only about to find a job or join the company, but it takes more.

In this era, some citizen still assume that there is no different between bachelor degree's holder and ordinary people get success without their tittle. Some people directly go to work and learn from their experience for work-force. It is the best way to learn about practical skills. But university does not go like that. University gives a lot of knowledge and the students have to expand it. I mean many aspects that student will get from the university, but it depends on the students, if they want to make for their future better, they have to do more effort on it. Miss understanding of studying in universities make the student get lost. It is not completely university's fault. But the way of students in distinguish between is studying and working is wrong.

In conclusion, it is not about being alumnus and then getting a job directly, but the way that you catch the lesson you have learn in university should be qualified. Not even a single knowledge that we learn in university is useless. Sometimes, university does not only give the material of the subject, but it will give you some lessons life that you need to survive for the future.

Writing Feedback / To understand all the matter connected with the scientific research and to avoid some damage [3]

Scientific research today attempts to go too far.There are certain things in the world which we simply should should not try to understand.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Science is the knowledge about human effort to understand,or to understand better,the history of the natural world and how the natural world works,with observation and some experiments made by scientists.Nowadays,scientific research has deeply explored.there are some particular thingsthat we should not take a chance to know it,in this whole world.I pretty disagree about this statement.

At the moment when we come to this world,we did not understand about anything which connected with the scientific research at all.So we have to learn and get the knowledge from the school or university.we have to know the basic in order to go with the new era.Because throughout the years,there are so many new inventions and experiments that scientists do.Natural resources have an important role for human needs.The scientists can exploit it and make a new evolution from it.Everybody knows if the scientific research has a function in our environment ,especially in our life,such as technology development,medical,transportation and many more.If we can learn about the function,effect,and how to improve something.It can be apply in our daily lifes.

It is okay if we do not master the subject of scientific research,but better if we want to learn more.Because there are some people who are specialized in some fields learn more about scientific research.We just follow the progress to the new invention.

Obviously,scientific research in this era to goes too far because throughout the years,the new experiments and new invention come from the scientists.And it makes some effects for our lives,such as supporting our daily necesities or solving our life's problem.I disagree with the statement because knowledge that we have learnt is useful.We just need to think what the proper scientific is and how to not damage the world.