lisvxx
Jul 31, 2016
Grammar, Usage / Help me rephrase this sentence in an appealing way :) [5]
Some one asked me today would you hire someone with hardwork or talent...i answered talent and he was like, for the business "Talent is useless if the person isnt going to hardwork. Hardwork is useless if the person has no talent" I found this statement very amazing and i want to add it to my essay but could someone please rephrase it for me (like make it sound like a nice deep meaningful phrase) in a nice way that will appeal the adcom at an ivy league im applying to? i want it to be before this sentence in my essay:
Combining my hardwork and talent, I aspire to work with.....
Some one asked me today would you hire someone with hardwork or talent...i answered talent and he was like, for the business "Talent is useless if the person isnt going to hardwork. Hardwork is useless if the person has no talent" I found this statement very amazing and i want to add it to my essay but could someone please rephrase it for me (like make it sound like a nice deep meaningful phrase) in a nice way that will appeal the adcom at an ivy league im applying to? i want it to be before this sentence in my essay:
Combining my hardwork and talent, I aspire to work with.....