Writing Feedback / Logging can damage the environmental life in forests - it brings deforestation [2]

IELTS Writing Task 1 : Summary of Environmental Impacts of Logging

Now days, logging is the new world's half-truth has two-side are major part of industry era and one of the most contributor of the global warming. Logging can damage the environmental life in forest as deforestation. Forest is home of part of ecosystem namely animals, plants, amphibians, small mammals, insects, and worms, which all of them create stability in eco.

Accordingly, the vanishing of the forest, destroy the ecosystem and imply to increase the global warming. The forest does not able to defense erosion, increasing of carbon dioxide in atmosphere, water and air pollution during to massive logging. Not only deforestation but also road building and burn large forest area are logging companies do for create access to one area, with the result that forest loss contributes to protect this world from the global warming. Ultimately, forest would not help to protect us and sustainable for future generations.

Writing Feedback / The most longest migration in our galaxy is observed among birds. [2]

IELTS Writing Task 1 : Bird Migration

What the indomitable animal in this world? Perhaps, the answer goes to bird, for the simple reason that migration which that animal does is the most of longest migration in our galaxy. Moreover, they migration had been fascinating observers in this centuries.

The nocturnal bird as well as the diurnal bird as great navigator in migration era. The migration for birds is generally sense to reproduce their genus. They slated the migration to run in transitional season from cold month in northern hemisphere to warm month in southern hemisphere or on the contrary. Furthermore, there are many kinds of bird migration, namely trans-equatorial, hemisphere and from higher to lower latitudes migration. Nevertheless, the migration of not only talk about long distance movement but also shortly moving, namely exhibit altitudinal migration.