Writing Feedback / A number of large cities with skyscrapers and shopping centres replacing small villages [2]

The advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community

Nowadays, there are a lot of changes quite clearly, a number of large cities with skyscrapers and shopping centres replace small villages with fields, grasses, little roads. Also many of young people convert lifestyle and come to these cities. So, in the past, living in a small community brought some advantages and disadvantages.

I think life in small town had plenty of advantages. Firstly, everyone knew everyone else so neighbourhood was closer and people would not feel lonely. Secondly, the atmosphere was really fresh and peace without duty smoke from factories or traffic jam which badly affected for inhabitant's heath and got them some diseases. Moreover, when being at a tiny town, people didn't not face so much pressure, they hardly took stress about jobs, family, relations as much as at a city because race of life there was slower. Also, living there was cheaper so they probably afforded many essential things due to the lower prices.

Besides, one of the drawbacks of living in small community was quality of life, people in there earned less money and had fewer conditions to enjoy modern goods. Education in schools was actually poor and lacked of studying materials or facilities such as internet was not widespread there. On the other hand, to study in high school and college, young people had to leave from their hometowns to nearest area or large cities. Also like that, adults came to downtowns for working because there were a lot of jobs in a developing city. As a result, the small town where only old people and baby lived was so boring.

All things considering, each person will have individual lifestyle. Grandparents generation would like to live a peace place as small town but dynamic younger generation always want to stay a large city. The most important thing is where people decide to live will actually bring them happy and convenient the most.

Writing Feedback / Discuss about computers are replacing more and more jobs nowadays. [2]

The first computer in the world was believed to bring a more modern and convenient life and people could work in less pressure environment. But everything isn't like that yet, computers are unexpectedly replacing people's jobs. What is threatened is that an amount of unemployment can slightly go up and some jobs will be eliminated in the future.

It is obvious that a number of jobs be lost as a direct result of new computer technology. E - teacher program on the computer can make lectures with many kind of subjects such as english, geography, chemistry, math, physics...This program nearly provides necessary information that people just need to contact to a computer for their study without another direct teacher. As a consequence, teacher will be replaced by the computer.

Some jobs in post office also are affected like postman, delivering letters, money or goods. Nowadays, electronic mail system on computer is the best choice for sending letters, messages and the same things because of saving more time and money. Thus, email makes postman on the streets disappeared.

Furthermore, bank tellers are placed by automated bank machine which helps customers to solve their banking problems without contacting bank staff. The ATM as a part of smart computer system is really convenient for anyone who wants to withdraw money in credit card. Today, entering into a bank, customers can see more computers than employees who are hired to operate computers for transaction.

Another job as inspector, collecting tickets on bus or subway can't exist when a automated machine helps to do that task very well. Besides, coming to libraries or cinema theatres, people don't need to find someone to help for their request, just using computer to do anything they need.

All in all, many jobs will be replaced by computers, however; that is not actually positive. I believe that some of unnecessary jobs are lost and lots of new jobs will appear in the future. Technology is created by humans and only human can operate technology so that human workforce is extremely more valuable than technology.

Writing Feedback / How modern forms of communication change your life... People spend less time going out with friends [2]

Information technology (IT) is the word which changes many people's lifestyle. Nowadays, there are a lot of forms of communication via IT such as email, message, facebook... People spend less time going out with their friends. However, it's not certain to conclude about this negative effect on their lives, anyway, I think they are better.

In the past, people kept in touch with remote friends via written letter. It took many hours or even many days to receive from postman. It's so obvious that this communication way was extremely hard and as a result, the people's relationship can be faded. Social network such as email or facebook is so fast that people do not only save time but communicate conveniently.

Modern means of communication have become efficent tools for teamwork. For example, by video call or social forum on internet, everyone have taken easy to work together. They can organize plans, hold meetings, reports or even start-up. Those ways are useful in study and business.

Moreover, it is not suitable to argue that communication by internet have reduced the amount of people see each other. Social websites improve to make friend all over the world. People find and chat with many new friends and increase social circle. They can create a lot of appointments, parties and know how their friends feel, what the friends are doing, where they are now.

In conclusion, I disagree that modern forms of communication on social lives. I believe the appearing of social websites brings people closer together.