Posts by SaharHdi

SaharHdi

Oct 16, 2016

Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

Dear Sir or Madam
I saw your advertisment in local newspaper. I'm really need this job because I am student, Have a freetime at the end of week and really need money.

I've like this kind of work since I was child. I grew up in this city, know it very well and have alot of information about the tourist spots of it, so i can explain it very well for tourists.I know some languages such persian,spanish,German and I make connection very well with other people .

I have quite experince about this kind of work, one day I saw tourists in sight of my city and made connection with them, then visited most of the sights of our city and explained about the sight to them.

so i think i can do this work as well as you want. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Sahar

SaharHdi

Oct 17, 2016

Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

thamk everybody for your help. :))

SaharHdi

Oct 18, 2016

Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

hi @justivy03
thanks for your attention .
for first step, could you give me tittle that I'll write about it ?

SaharHdi

Oct 18, 2016

Writing Feedback / People's reasons for using the car in city [4]

Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ...
Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!! (shopping) and furthermore for leisure activitis.
i guess it's better use a same tense

SaharHdi

Oct 18, 2016

Scholarship / Graduate student from Senegal, West Africa writes a scholarship essay. Any suggestions ? [2]

For example, I was lucky to!!! for doing my undergraduate studies at Suffolk University, an American institute.
i think should ommite "to"

SaharHdi

Oct 19, 2016

Letters / 'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office [9]

Hi @justivy03
I studied english before , and nowadays I've been studying english again. these days I am improving my 4 skills in English nowadays.
here , I'm trying writting, because I study English self study .
thanks for your attention , and here I'll send you another writting that I wrote about title which you said.
thank you very much for your helping.
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I want tell you about my childhood, and hope you will help me and correct my mistakes. Thanks for your attention.
I really like my childhood and have a lot diary which I can't forget them. Now I want to say about some of those diary.

When I was a child I have a lot of friends whom they lived near my home. Most of the time we played a lot of games. Forexample we made ballons and released them in sky, when it went to sky then all of us shrilled to show we were happy.

One of my friends had bought chalkboard, we gathered to her home and wrote on it with chalk or we colored pictures in coloring book with crayons.

When the weather wasn't good we couln't stay in yard or alley so we went to my room and made crafts, because all of us liked artistic activities, so when the weather became good we went to alley and did firework or made beautiful things out of clay likes mugs,plates and bowls.

We had a lot of funny and unforgettable days with my friends . after some years we left the neighbourhood and I haven't seen my friends at all. I've missed my friends and I hope I see them again.

I've missed all the days which I had with them.