Writing Feedback / How many books have been read at Burnley by men and women? [3]

I think my essay sounds a bit repeatable at times - and also have several mistakes.

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... at Burnley library in the period between between 2011 to 2014.

..., who read about 24 000 Bookin that time .

In the final year of the given period , increased trend in the males ...
... the books diminished by 29 thousand, 29000 in order to became ...

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Writing Feedback / Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000 [2]

The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990 and 1980 to 1990 to 2000. Overall , from the three priod period there is difference different calculation (....) an increase and a decrease in annual expenditures.