Writing Feedback / IELTS-Task1: Sports played in New Zealand in 2002 [4]

The bar chart reveals the information about the favorite sports which were played mostly in New Zealand in 2002.
It can be clearly seen that the highest bar belonged to girls playing netball, opposed with the lowest figure of boys one.
According to the data, the most popular sport was netball enjoyed by girls, with participation rates reached the top at 25%. A similar percentage of boys was liked soccer, which was absolute their sport. There were 10% of boys also took part in cricket but nearly no girls played this sport. Besides, swimming seemed to be the popular with boys and girls, more girls preferred in this game (respectively 22% and 1%).

The others sports such as athletics, marital arts, basketball and tennis had fewer people enjoying while a significant figure of boys and girls said that they participated sports which didn't mention on the grap.

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Writing Feedback / The bar chart reveals the billion USD of the main exports namely:... [4]

The bar chart reveals the billion USD of the main exports namely: meat products, dairy products and international tourism in Someland in 2005, 2015 and it also indicates future projects for 2025.

It can be clearly seen that international tourism will become the dominant industry while the tendency of meat products will fall moderately.
According to the data, international tourism earned just over 6 billion USD, which is the highest figure shown on the chart in 2005. By contrast, meat products were the lowest overall exports, with around 4 billion USD.

In 2015, dairy products were the first key industry in Someland, which reached the top approximately at 8 billion USD. There were two extremes of two other exports. Meat products continued to drop moderately while international tourism increased significantly over 6 billion USD.

It is estimated that in 2025, international tourism will earn around 8 billion for the country. Expexts are predicting that export of dairy products will have a slight decrease, so the figure of 7,5 billion USD is expected for 2025, while meat products will continue to decrease and reach the lowest at 3,5 billion USD in the future

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