desinlim
Jan 22, 2017
Undergraduate / NUS Asean Scholarship Personal Statement-Key qualities. [4]
@Holt
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I am determined to pursue a degree in NUS, it will allow me to understand and apply theories to the dynamic financial markets. Having studied a repertoire of subjects during high school, I believe I am capable of making exceptional efforts in the field as well as communicating within multiple communities.
Firstly, I am capable of taking up academic and extracurricular knowledge. As an over-achiever, I obtained the second place in my class while working part-time, and serving the Library Society as a Group Leader. Taekwondo class was attained weekly and my reading habit was maintained. I won the first prize in school level Book Review Competition. My hard work pays off because of my consistent effort and diligence. Thus, I have tried to constantly improve and enrich my mind.
Besides, I have been awarded Duke of Edinburgh's Silver award for being all-rounded physically and mentally. I was the top 5 winners in my school of Business Zoom In Competition held by Taylor's University, Malaysia which aims to enhance student's understanding and awareness of business skills such as problem solving, critical thinking, and time management.
Lastly, I have worked in a successful team-based environment in my co-curriculum activity. As a group leader, I have assigned tasks to my members and following up with them frequently. The relationship among the committee remains close as we often concern recent situation of one another. We have organized mini book fairs and published a magazine. Hence, I am a good team player and are able to do things independently as well.
Ultimately, I am excited to be in the studious environment of NUS. Classroom discussions will be participated actively. I will make NUS proud that I was its student with my full effort. I will be able to use my knowledge to clear people's doubts after completing the course. The experience that I gain is able to help my colleagues and contribute to the society.
@Holt
Is this better? I have tried to keep it within the word limit. Thank you.
I am determined to pursue a degree in NUS, it will allow me to understand and apply theories to the dynamic financial markets. Having studied a repertoire of subjects during high school, I believe I am capable of making exceptional efforts in the field as well as communicating within multiple communities.
Firstly, I am capable of taking up academic and extracurricular knowledge. As an over-achiever, I obtained the second place in my class while working part-time, and serving the Library Society as a Group Leader. Taekwondo class was attained weekly and my reading habit was maintained. I won the first prize in school level Book Review Competition. My hard work pays off because of my consistent effort and diligence. Thus, I have tried to constantly improve and enrich my mind.
Besides, I have been awarded Duke of Edinburgh's Silver award for being all-rounded physically and mentally. I was the top 5 winners in my school of Business Zoom In Competition held by Taylor's University, Malaysia which aims to enhance student's understanding and awareness of business skills such as problem solving, critical thinking, and time management.
Lastly, I have worked in a successful team-based environment in my co-curriculum activity. As a group leader, I have assigned tasks to my members and following up with them frequently. The relationship among the committee remains close as we often concern recent situation of one another. We have organized mini book fairs and published a magazine. Hence, I am a good team player and are able to do things independently as well.
Ultimately, I am excited to be in the studious environment of NUS. Classroom discussions will be participated actively. I will make NUS proud that I was its student with my full effort. I will be able to use my knowledge to clear people's doubts after completing the course. The experience that I gain is able to help my colleagues and contribute to the society.