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Posts by missayufitri
Name: Ayu Fitri
Joined: Dec 25, 2016
Last Post: Apr 15, 2017
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From: Indonesia
School: The State University of Surabaya

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missayufitri   
Apr 15, 2017
Scholarship / Specific examples of dealing with difficult situation, providing a good change [4]

Dear friends,

I hope you have time to read and give me any suggestion. I will appreciate every comment. Thank you in advance :)

How have you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform?
(Be specific and include: what aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established and effective; which people or organisations you worked with to solve the problem; and what creative methods were used.)


the learning process



I have become a volunteer English tutor at [name] since 2015 and have enjoyed teaching there. [name] is one of the public services of the government of [name] in promoting foreign language learning. Its purpose is to prepare the people of [name] facing the 2015 ASEAN Economic Community. The participants vary, from professionals to senior high school students, and because of this diversity, sometimes tutors have difficulties in preparing materials to deliver.

I was a part-time English teacher at [name] from 2013 to 2015. [name] is one of leading private English schools in the world and has gained its competency in the world of English language teaching and learning. Having gained the valuable experience working at [name], I rarely have a problem preparing the lesson at [name] yet other tutors experience different circumstances.

Some of the English tutors find it hard to get proper and diverse materials that leads to the repetition of using the same material over and over again. Students who come regularly to [name] may find the class boring as the number of students keeps decreasing during the time. On the other hand, the classes which I conduct have quite large numbers of students. It is the material that I deliver to the class which makes students enjoy learning. Since I have equipped with various teaching and learning resources, I seldom use the same material. In fact, there is positive feedback from students regarding the way I teach and the material I deliver.

After class, tutors always have friendly discussion in tutors' area and I use the chance to introduce useful resources to other tutors. Today, I can say that the number of students is increasing. Other tutors have used various resources to deliver materials such as games, communicative class activities, or fun worksheets and workbooks. I believe that both students and tutors enjoy the learning process now.
missayufitri   
Apr 15, 2017
Undergraduate / My reasons of choosing master of health management. [6]

@Myo Cho

I think it's better to provide reasons based on the courses which you hope / think will be relevant with your future career or will help you achieve your goals. AAS may consider all Australian universities are the best so talking about ranking will not impress the committee. It also indicates that you make an in-depth online research, checking all the possible courses, checking every university website one by one.

Actually this suggestion is from an awardee and has helped me with my essay. I do hope this can help you too. Good luck.
missayufitri   
Apr 11, 2017
Scholarship / This school will lead me to the teacher profession. Australia Awards Scholarship Essay 2 [4]

@Hiddengrace

Thank you for your suggestion. I will keep in mind to be more positive so I can sell myself well hehehe.
Actually the scholarship allows applicants to choose up to 2 programs that's why I mention them in the essay. Basically those programs are from two different schools, but have the same structures more or less.

@Holt

Thank you for your suggestion. I will keep in mind to be more specific. Focus, focus, focus. It looks like now I have a clearer idea to start writing the essay.
missayufitri   
Apr 10, 2017
Scholarship / This school will lead me to the teacher profession. Australia Awards Scholarship Essay 2 [4]

Dear friends,

I hope you have time to read and give me any suggestion. I will appreciate every comment. Thank you in advance :)

How will the proposed study contribute to your career?



Master of [name] at [name] or Master of [name] at [name] offers a really good course. Step by step students will deepen their understanding of the English language teaching and learning. For example, firstly students will be introduced and acquainted with latest issues, secondly they will engage with research, thirdly they will develop their expertise, and lastly, they will upgrade the practical skills needed. I must say that those can fit my academic and career needs well. As an English teacher who can be considered new in the field, I always find that something is missing. I have an experience in teaching, yes, that is right. I have attended some teacher training to enhance my skills, yes that is also right. Unfortunately, I feel that I have not got the crucial knowledge that can fill the missing part.

Sometimes I wonder how to deal with students who are not too motivated in learning English or how to develop communicative and effective teaching materials. I did try to discuss it with fellow teachers yet nothing really works. Also, I did try to attend a teacher training regularly yet I still feel something is missing. I guess the problem is that I do not have the proper knowledge in English language teaching and learning. I cannot fully understand the problem occurred and as the result, I cannot handle it well. Recently I took a massive open online course (MOOC) in English language teaching and learning. I fascinated by the fact that there are so many things that I have not discovered before. I believe that by taking Master of [name] or Master of [name], I will discover other important knowledge regarding English language teaching and learning. This new knowledge will enhance not only skills, but also supplement critical thinking. Plus, I will get the chance to obtain a qualification in teaching so that I can teach at the university and share the knowledge to a wider audience.
missayufitri   
Apr 10, 2017
Scholarship / Personal statement "why I wish to be considered for a Scholarship" [2]

Dear ArchF,

It looks like you had wonderful years at the university, congratulations.

However, I must say that your beginning and middle paragraphs don't fit the last one well. It is really great to read your previous achievements, but the committee can also read them in your CV. I hope you explore your goal more in the essay. Tell them about your dream, your effort, everything that you find related to your proposed program and scholarship.

I hope this can help. Good luck.
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