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Name: ASHWIN BALACHANDAR SHIVA SHANKAR
Joined: Jan 2, 2017
Last Post: Jan 30, 2017
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ashivash   
Jan 30, 2017
Letters / A most undervalued candidate misjudged by many of his counterparts - recommendation letter [2]

mentor's recommendation letter



I am pleased to be able to write this recommendation letter for Ashwin Balachandar, Shivashankar. I have known Ashwin for more than four years in my capacity as supervisor/mentor ever since he joined Capgemini India Pvt. Ltd. My Acquaintance with him spread over the span of four years has given me an opportunity to observe carefully and judge his capabilities.

Ashwin was most undervalued canditate misjudged by many of his counterpart on the swap in discipline from mechanical to IT industry, raised the bar as to whether he can compete to work with the finest in the field. I as a mentor have seen, Ashwin grow up to the person who he is now today. Even though his first few years were a harsh ride, Ashwin's a keen interest towards the corporate world and to excel in the field he decide to work up has made him exceed the bar set by everyone.

As a mentor, I have guided Ashwin with the skills/need to survive in the fields, but his intellectual ability and inventiveness to analyze and provide solution combined with his keen interest to learn new technology and to adapt to change; have made him a more reliable developer. His recent work during tenure at SSE, UK has been appreciated the clients for his innovative approach to avoid loss of message transmitted due to connectivity issue by the development of new web tool to monitor, analyze and resubmit failed transaction.

Ashwin has exceeded the limits set by the upper management and has been among the list of successful bids as a developer for the fusion projects. I am happy to draw up the sum to say that Ashwin has an individual will be an invaluable asset to any organization/institution and I highly recommend him admission for graduate studies with financial assistance. In the case of any query or confirmation feel free to contact me anytime.
ashivash   
Jan 30, 2017
Writing Feedback / Task 2 ielts - sports and exercise classes and academic subjects [4]

@maitouyen1
Hi maitouyen,

Please be precise on how you want to point a singular item or noun, I can see the usage of "One's", "Ones" with more lively alternative like a person or a individual.

This is going to leave a bad remark on your writing skills.

Thanks,
Ashwin
ashivash   
Jan 30, 2017
Letters / Oracle technical skills, diagnosis expertness and other abilities. MS in Data Science recommendation [5]

@Holt - please provide your inputs on this LOR.

I am pleased to be able to write this recommendation letter for Ashwin Balachandar, Shivashankar. I have known Ashwin for more than four years in my capacity as supervisor/mentor ever since he joined Capgemini India Pvt. Ltd. My Acquaintance with him spread over the span of four years has given me an opportunity to observe carefully and judge his capabilities.

Ashwin was most undervalued canditate misjudged by many of his counterpart on the swap in discipline from mechanical to IT industry, raised the bar as to whether he can compete to work with the finest in the field. I as a mentor have seen, Ashwin grow up to the person who he is now today. Even though his first few years were a harsh ride, Ashwin's a keen interest towards the corporate world and to excel in the field he decide to work up has made him exceed the bar set by everyone.

As a mentor, I have guided Ashwin with the skills/need to survive in the fields, but his intellectual ability and inventiveness to analyze and provide solution combined with his keen interest to learn new technology and to adapt to change; have made him a more reliable developer. His recent work during tenure at SSE, UK has been appreciated the clients for his innovative approach to avoid loss of message transmitted due to connectivity issue by the development of new web tool to monitor, analyze and resubmit failed transaction.

Ashwin has exceeded the limits set by the upper management and has been among the list of successful bids as a developer for the fusion projects. I am happy to draw up the sum to say that Ashwin has an individual will be an invaluable asset to any organization/institution and I highly recommend him admission for graduate studies with financial assistance. In the case of any query or confirmation feel free to contact me anytime.
ashivash   
Jan 23, 2017
Letters / Oracle technical skills, diagnosis expertness and other abilities. MS in Data Science recommendation [5]

admission to the Master in Data Science Program



I am extremely delighted to pen this letter recommending Mr Ashwin Balachandar Shivashankar in support of his admission to the Master in Data Science Program at your University. I have known Ashwin for the past one and half years in my position as Data Insights, Project Manager.

Ashwin joined the SSE Smart Metering Programme in Nov 2015 as Oracle Fusion Developer. He was initially given a set of development components for the areas of the Integration Layer that he was responsible for and through progress updates at our daily standup meetings, he was able to provide me, as PM, the progress made the day before and the plan for actions for the current day and next day. Ashwin dealt with the initial challenges we had at first, patiently and in a professional manner. He gave me daily updates on how this was progressing.

Ashwin was also instrumental as a developer in supporting the design documentation by the architects and challenging when necessary and he gained some valuable knowledge in doing this.

Ashwin displayed a high level of leadership skills and provided his whole support to the various teams he worked with and was a credible member of the team trusted by us and the client even when they were proving to be a challenge.

I would recommend Ashwin to other project managers facing a similar project environment as he was very effective and demonstrated his superior technical skills in whatever area he worked in.

Ashwin has demonstrated strong Oracle technical skills during various meetings and the conducting of component tests especially when sitting down with the testers to explain the Integration Layer solution.

Ashwin proved his expertise at Diagnosis and fault finding and defect resolution when supporting the testers during SIT testing and also when he had to work with the HPE developers who came over to UK due to the high no of defects they were facing on their solution which was facing off to our IL solution.

Ashwin worked closely with the SSE Support team who needed to work with us to develop their knowledge of the Oracle solution and has proved his in-depth knowledge and excellent Client facing skills, presentation skills and communication skills in English.

To conclude, I would like to restate my strong recommendation for Mr Ashwin Balachandar Shivashankar. If you have any further clarifications regarding Mr Ashwin Balachandar Shivashankar or this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me using the contact details mentioned below:
ashivash   
Jan 3, 2017
Scholarship / "I have to go for it" - Letter of Self-Introduction KGSP - Masters Degree in Korea [3]

November 26th, 1993 -> Add a Comma
middle- class family
outstanding grades, I also -> Add a Comma
another social activities Consider replacing it with other
Third Paragraph ---> education, I volunteered--> Add a Comma
Fourth Paragraph --> the volunteering, I started --> Add a Comma
that consisted of measuring weight
Fifth Paragraph - the sentence is very long consider breaking into multiple sentences
My interest for Korea --> Replace with in
self- learn
The KGSP really inspired me to continue with my education and pursue a Masters Degree --> remove really and With redunant prepositions
my Masters Degree inKorea, I am ---> Replace Comma with ; --> my Masters Degree in Korea; I am

Try to replace Frequently used words such as big, nutrition and participating with some alternatives to make it look more attractive.
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