/ "Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP
Hello. This is my self introduction letter for KGSP 2017.
I need some advise because I don't have much experience about writing essay.
Please, help me improve. Thank you
Circumstances in which I grew up
I was born in 1994. When I was 3 years old my parents went to Korea to work. So I was raised by my grandmother, and my parents returned in 2006. Right now I'm living with my parents and my younger brother who is 9 years old.
In my opinion my grandmother established today's me. I am outgoing, modest and hardworking person. I have been participating in social activities a lot. For example, I entered ballroom dancing competition, and mathematic, physic and other subjects competition in general education school. When I was in university, I was in responsible for secretary of class, member of debate club and organize debating and speech competition in the university.
My life motto is "Where there is will, there is a way'. I had proved it to myself because I participated in lot of competition. Competitions that I prepared was turned out very well, in opposite if I didn't prepare it the results were bad. My biggest competition was "The 18th National Accounting Competition" which is held in the 4th year of Mandakh Burtgel University. Participating in this competition was the one of biggest goal I had, because this competition verify the most successful student in accounting study field. 3rd year of university I hadn't prepared well and I dropped out. And next year I decided to try hard and I prepared very well so it showed very good result.
I think life is about choice. We can't have anything we want. If we choose something on the other side we lose some other thing. So main thing in life is make a good choice. But how we know was it good or not. In my opinion, It'll depend on how happy you're now, and how much do you regret. There is nothing easy in life, choices can be wrong. It can't be right all the time. If we learn from our wrong choice and won't make same mistake again it means we are improving and learning new things.
Life is very unpredictable and full of opportunity. And I don't want to waste it. This scholarship is one of the biggest opportunity in my life. In my opinion disappointment try is better than not trying
We'll live once. So I try to live without regret, but I think this is impossible. I hope the choices that I choose will be a good. I wish when I turn sixty or seventy, I'll be proud of myself because I will be done everything that I want.
Life is not easy.o Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
I was entered in elementary school when I was seven years old, and graduated high school in 2011. After that I entered "Mandakh Burtgel" university's Banking economy-accounting class and graduated in 2015 spring. Now I'm working as an accountant at "Altan Joloo Impex" LLC.
When I was in last year of high school, I decided to get bachelor degree in Mongolia, and get master degree in abroad. Because studying in abroad will be advantage for my career opportunities, increase my language ability, meet new culture, national and make a life experience.
I couldn't afford to learn in abroad by personal finance. So I was looking for a scholarship and, first time I knew about KGSP in 2011. At that time I was 1st year of my university, so I decided to submit my application this scholarship after I graduate.o Your motivations for applying for this program
Comparing other scholarship program this is scholarship has lot of offers.
Advantage for study in abroad:
Language- study foreign language, improve language skills
Life experience- personal development
Explore new culture, meet a new surrounding, and see the world
These will be a big investment for my futureo My reason for study in Korea:
1.I always wondered about Korea because my parents were working in there. When I was kid I wanted to know about what kind of country are they living? And it continued my interest in Korea became huge and it's number one country I want to go.
2.Korea is one of leading country of its development.