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Name: Azzaya
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azaa1428   
Mar 6, 2017
Graduate / My study plan for KGSP 2017 in MSA /Master in Accountancy/ [2]

Hello
I don't have any experience to write a statement of purpose and I am totally blanked out. I tried to write a little bit but it is very lacking

Please direct me.
I appreciate any advice. Thank you


kgsp application



I have 2 main goals of study during KGSP. I won't graduate successfully if I can't understand fully what I am learning. So within one year of Korean language course, I will obtain TOPIK level 5. Another goal is to become a more advanced knowledgeable accountant and I will have been improved my skills such as researching method, financial analysing and presenting reports after I graduate.

Any research has to have a benefit. So I will decide my research topic after consulting with professors. But I have research title that I want to do. This is to do comparing research between Mongolian and other developed countries. A subject that I have been considering is "Reason to have an internal audit in a company, its development in Mongolia and other countries". An audit is about monitoring and advising. Although the development of internal audit is increasing in Mongolia last few years and Mongolian commercial banks and few big companies have an internal audit but most of the companies and their managers haven't fully recognised the benefit of internal audit. So if my research can be substantive, I can contribute the development of internal audit in Mongolia. In order to do successful research, firstly I need to do a study about the circumstance of a present internal audit of the world. Then describe which level Mongolian internal audit growth is in and after that, what should companies need to do in order to reach world level? What was the experience of other companies?
azaa1428   
Mar 5, 2017
Scholarship / "Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP [15]

@Holt
I have a question.
You advised me to write about "What work did they do there that kept them there that long? What did they tell you about Korea and how their life was there?"

Actually my parents worked there illegally and work in factory or cleaning service etc.
Is it okey to mention these?
But they always say that living Korea is very nice.
azaa1428   
Mar 4, 2017
Scholarship / "Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP [15]

@Holt
I rewrited my self introduction.
I still don't sure about how to start and how to end my essay.
Please take a look again.
Thank you.

I was born in 1994. When I was 3 years old my parents went to Korea to work. So I was raised by my grandmother and my parents returned in 2006. Now I'm living with my parents and my younger brother who is 9 years old. In my opinion, my grandmother established today's who I am. I am outgoing, modest and hardworking person. I have been participating in social activities a lot. For example, I joined ballroom dancing competition, and mathematic, physic and other subjects competition in general education school. When I was in university, I was in responsible for secretary of class and member of debate club and organize debating and speech competition in the university.

My life motto is "Where there is will, there is a way'. I had proved it to myself because I participated in lot of competition while I was studying in undergraduate university. Competitions that I prepared was turned out very well, in opposite if I didn't prepare well the results were bad. I think life is about choice. We can't have anything we want. If we choose something on the other side we lose some other thing. So main thing in life is make a good choice. But how we know was it good or not. In my opinion, It'll depend on how happy you're now, and how much do you regret. There is nothing easy in life, choices can be wrong. It can't be right all the time. If we learn from our wrong choice and won't make same mistake again it means we are improving and learning new things.

I was entered in elementary school when I was seven years old, and graduated high school in 2011. After that I entered "Mandakh Burtgel" university's Banking economy-accounting class and I graduated in 2015 spring. As I mentioned before I was secretary of class. So I was in charge of organizing my classmates for university's social activities and other competitions besides academic study. During my undergraduate study, my biggest competition was "The 18th National Accounting Competition" which was held in the 4th year of Mandakh Burtgel University. Participating in this competition was the one of biggest goal I had, because this competition verify the most successful student in accounting study field. 3rd year of university, I hadn't prepared well and I couldn't even pass 1st stage. And next year I decided to try hard and I prepared very well so I selected one of 5 students who are represent university and we won bronze medal for team and I distinguished TOP10 personally. This result gave me lot of encourage and confidence. In undergraduate university, I got more knowledge and beside that as an individual I became more responsibility.

Now I'm working as an accountant at "Altan Joloo Impex" LLC. At first, I was in charge of recording sales and inventory. After working 6 months, I started to present tax reports and financial statements. This work helped me to improve as a professional accountant and confirm my education about what I learned from bachelor degree. Although after I entered job I developed my personal knowledge and other individual skills, I realize that I still have lot to learn. So it reminded me that when I was in last year of high school, I decided to get bachelor degree in Mongolia, after that study in graduate study in abroad. Because studying in abroad will be advantage for my career opportunities, increase my language ability, meet new culture, national and make a life experience. I couldn't afford to learn in abroad by personal finance. So I was looking for a scholarship and, first time I knew about KGSP in 2011. At that time I was 1st year of my university, so I decided to submit my application to the scholarship after I graduate Mandakh Burtgel university.

Life is very unpredictable and full of opportunity. This scholarship will be one of biggest opportunity in my life. And I don't want to waste this opportunity because it is provide with full scholarship and studying in Korea will be a big investment for my future.

I always wondered about Korea because my parents were working there for about 10 years. When I was kid I wanted to know about what kind of country were they living and working? So my curious in Korea became increased year by year and it leaded me to interest in Korean TV programs, dramas and songs. Because of these I continued to learn about Korean culture and language. As more to know more I wanted to go Korea and me most known country after Mongolia is Korea.

On the other side, Korea is one of leading country its development and its environment. Studying in there is like to kill two birds with one stone for me. Because I will get high education with scholarship in developed country that I always wanted to go.
azaa1428   
Feb 20, 2017
Scholarship / "Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP [15]

Hello. This is my self introduction letter for KGSP 2017.
I need some advise because I don't have much experience about writing essay.
Please, help me improve. Thank you

Circumstances in which I grew up



I was born in 1994. When I was 3 years old my parents went to Korea to work. So I was raised by my grandmother, and my parents returned in 2006. Right now I'm living with my parents and my younger brother who is 9 years old.

In my opinion my grandmother established today's me. I am outgoing, modest and hardworking person. I have been participating in social activities a lot. For example, I entered ballroom dancing competition, and mathematic, physic and other subjects competition in general education school. When I was in university, I was in responsible for secretary of class, member of debate club and organize debating and speech competition in the university.

My life motto is "Where there is will, there is a way'. I had proved it to myself because I participated in lot of competition. Competitions that I prepared was turned out very well, in opposite if I didn't prepare it the results were bad. My biggest competition was "The 18th National Accounting Competition" which is held in the 4th year of Mandakh Burtgel University. Participating in this competition was the one of biggest goal I had, because this competition verify the most successful student in accounting study field. 3rd year of university I hadn't prepared well and I dropped out. And next year I decided to try hard and I prepared very well so it showed very good result.

I think life is about choice. We can't have anything we want. If we choose something on the other side we lose some other thing. So main thing in life is make a good choice. But how we know was it good or not. In my opinion, It'll depend on how happy you're now, and how much do you regret. There is nothing easy in life, choices can be wrong. It can't be right all the time. If we learn from our wrong choice and won't make same mistake again it means we are improving and learning new things.

Life is very unpredictable and full of opportunity. And I don't want to waste it. This scholarship is one of the biggest opportunity in my life. In my opinion disappointment try is better than not trying

We'll live once. So I try to live without regret, but I think this is impossible. I hope the choices that I choose will be a good. I wish when I turn sixty or seventy, I'll be proud of myself because I will be done everything that I want.

Life is not easy.

o Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
I was entered in elementary school when I was seven years old, and graduated high school in 2011. After that I entered "Mandakh Burtgel" university's Banking economy-accounting class and graduated in 2015 spring. Now I'm working as an accountant at "Altan Joloo Impex" LLC.

When I was in last year of high school, I decided to get bachelor degree in Mongolia, and get master degree in abroad. Because studying in abroad will be advantage for my career opportunities, increase my language ability, meet new culture, national and make a life experience.

I couldn't afford to learn in abroad by personal finance. So I was looking for a scholarship and, first time I knew about KGSP in 2011. At that time I was 1st year of my university, so I decided to submit my application this scholarship after I graduate.

o Your motivations for applying for this program
Comparing other scholarship program this is scholarship has lot of offers.
Advantage for study in abroad:
•Language- study foreign language, improve language skills
•Life experience- personal development
•Explore new culture, meet a new surrounding, and see the world
•Career opportunities
•Globalization
These will be a big investment for my future

o My reason for study in Korea:
1.I always wondered about Korea because my parents were working in there. When I was kid I wanted to know about what kind of country are they living? And it continued my interest in Korea became huge and it's number one country I want to go.

2.Korea is one of leading country of its development.