Posts by Sprouty93

Sprouty93

Mar 14, 2017

Writing Feedback / The talk about your favorite language [5]

@doanquoc
I think including how you first became interested in English might help you talk more about what attracted you to love this language. Your purpose of studying English might be welcomed in this essay.

You talked a lot about what's hard for you in English, try to talk also about what are you good at maybe ?
And please check your grammar and spelling mistakes :)
Good luck~

Sprouty93

Mar 13, 2017

Scholarship / Accomplishing something authentic; KGSP: FUTURE PLAN AFTER STUDY [4]

@Holt
First of all, thanks a lot for responding Mary.

I'm actually applying for a doctoral degree and since I didn't establish my study plan with all its details yet, I couldn't add more specifics :(

When I said "a panel of choices" I was referring to 1) Being a researcher and contributing in the developpement of this technique in korea, 2) Getting an actual job there, and extend my stay there 3) Back to my country, I will teach at a university 4) Do more research and publish articles to get a professorship degree later. All that thanks to KGSP.

I'm focussing on vegetable crops and not flowers, thanks to ideas you gave me,i feel like I need to be more innovative and think more about doing my own thing back home. I've always wanted to teach at a university and be helpful to students cause I get them since i've been in their seats. I only thought about teaching and research haha Still.. I'm confused about how I can use my research subject which is in general about growing vegetable crops using hydroponics or even my major, to add sth to "Korea" or the "Korean market" as their technology is really advenced in this subject and I didn't start my research there yet T-T

I'll think more about it, try to develop this essay and post it again. I'll appreciate more advice if you have more to add ^^

Thank you a bunch!

Sprouty93

Mar 12, 2017

Scholarship / Accomplishing something authentic; KGSP: FUTURE PLAN AFTER STUDY [4]

Hello everyone ^-^
I'm a bit lacking inspiration these days so I'll be grateful if you guide me throughout this essay and point out what i should modify.

Thanks in advance!

a panel of choices

o Future plan in Korea or another country after study in Korea

This scholarship program will actually provide me with a panel of choices.
Being grateful towards the Korean government, I'll certainly contribute as a researcher developing the hydroponic technique, being innovative and making it more practical to promote Korean hydroponic techniques in arid countries like (mine).

I want to earn my place, create an opportunity to work in Korea; I'd like to enrich the university research knowledge I gained with an actual job experience.

Going back to my home country, I'm willing to transfer knowledge I acquired and help the next generation of students so that they can benefit from the overseas training I received. My priority will be feeding youth's greed for knowledge. I want to inspire students and broaden their views and ideas about horticulture by teaching at the university. I've had an opportunity of being a vacant teacher, but I'm eager to be a permanent teacher there pursuing my dream of getting a professorship degree. I'd like also to introduce Korean culture and clear all misunderstandings XX people have about it.

I'm sure I'll do more research related to my doctoral thesis subject throughout the period of time I'll spend teaching; I want to leave my fingerprint by accomplishing something authentic and be able to puzzle out all problems and difficulties surrounding hydroponic systems in (my country) thanks to the expertise and experience this scholarship program will grant me.