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Name: Dang Thi Thu Nga
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Last Post: Mar 27, 2017
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thunga251090   
Mar 27, 2017
Writing Feedback / Which school facilities should receive money from the local authorities? [3]

Financial Aid - What Types of Schools?



Current reports in the local area shows that nearly 80% of the general school equipment has been downgraded. As the result of which, parents start to be worried about their offspring and complain the local authorities. At the end of discussion, the dignities made a decision about the innovation of educational facilities.

Classroom technology is a worthy recommendation. It is believed that using advance gadgets will motivate learners effectively, especially for who are majoring in informative technology. Moreover, teachers, nowadays, are in proficiency of utilizing modern instruments such as laptops, i pads and so forth to prepare their lesson plans. Unequipped projectors and electronic teaching tools will not only waste of time and money but also raise breathing problems for lecturers and pupils when using chalks or markers for a long time.

The priority for renovation, however, should be to restore libraries. Researching outside classroom and taking time to read references are essential to learners, therefore, enriching libraries with filtered materials will aid them a lot. Although some people claim that why students have to need books when Internet is always available, the others says many brand-new specialized materials are not updated on network. In addition, most of educational institutions are nursery and primary premises whose pupils there can't use computers and Internet well and are easily distracted by cartoons, games and so on.

Both would be beneficial and necessary to enhance, but reading store would also be advantageous because there are still learners outside who only concentrate when keeping a book in hand rather than an e-book.
thunga251090   
Mar 24, 2017
Writing Feedback / People can be closer eachother. How Internet affect on our life? [6]

@AndreiWindy
I am the opinion of that your essay is not good enough because the thesis statement and supporting are not written correctly and there is no any main ideas at the first of each paragraph. Moreover, so much repeating phrases makes your essay sparse and blank, then, the conclusion is also inappropriate to the final sentence in paragraph one. Sorry to say that.
thunga251090   
Mar 24, 2017
Letters / Canada Visit - Reply a friend's invitation. [2]

Flying to Canada



Dear Robin,

I'm so excited about receiving your letter and of course, thank you for inviting me. Flying to Canada for sports camp with you is driving me crazy. Having say that, I have just experienced a hectic period of final tests in this semester and I'm fed up with staying at home without doing nothing so I only wish to be in your place right away.

I would prefer sleeping in tents to staying in rooms, certainly, that's a camp. I would imagine that we would have some amazing nights talking about our lives these days. It's so much fun.

Moreover, after my previous exam, I had some time with my grandma, therefore I was taught some new cuisine. I'm fanatical about cooking as you know. It will make you surprise due to the flavor of my own promising dish with her secret recipe.

By the way, my relatives are extremely mad about Canadian fashion. I reckon we should drop by sever shops so that I can buy some clothes as souvenirs. The other parts of the plan will be arranged later.

I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Jane
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