Writing Feedback / Two maps show an island before and after development - IELTS TASK 1 [3]

Hello! Soon I will be taking an IELTS, so could you help me with my essay evaluating? I have to get at least 6.5 band score.

Please, make some corrections if possible :)

maps of an island comparison

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The maps represent an island before and after establishing some tourist attractions and different facilities.
Overall, the island changed a lot after constructing some facilities on the western and middle parts of total area. It can be seen that eastern part of territory stayes untouched.

First of all I will focus on the western coast of the island. A beach is located for swimming there. Moving on, there is a footpath from the beach which leads to accomodation buildings. After them the reception facility is established at the very middle of the island. Moreover, it is surronded by vehicle tracks. One of them lays towards the restaurant on the north. Another goes down to the pier on the southside. The pier was built rather long and it has a T form.

The last thing that may be noticed is a group of accomodation facilities located a bit further to the east than reception. Each building is connected with a footpath, but there is no connection between the group of buildings and the reception. Considering untouched eastern part of island's area, there are some palm trees as well.

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