Writing Feedback / Should grade 12 University level English be a requirement for entry into all university programs? [3]

Well structured essay. You did a nice job of picking an argument and providing examples to defend the statement. I think it expands well beyond 12th grade english as you have mentioned. We study the english language in school to build a strong foundation that can be build upon in high education and real life experiences. Great job with incorporating quotes into the essay. The quotes and sentences flowed nicely. In order to expand upon the topic you can discuss how language various in different cultures or how it various in different age groups. Perhaps discussing how language has changed from centuries ago to current time.

Graduate / Professionalism as a DPT student. Physical Therapy Application Essay [3]

Great essay. You gave great examples and clear examples of why you thought these qualities were important in the field of physical therapy. You also did a really good job of stating how these qualities are important to have while treating patients in order to provide the best care and also explained how you have demonstrated these qualities as a student. Overall the essay was detailed, clear and free flowing. You targeted important qualities all health care providers should demonstrate.

I would also expand upon the characteristics. Think about the qualities a health care professional must embody. Communication skills as you discussed are very crucial, however other characteristics such as empathy, enthusiasm and being approachable, etc. Many people have good communication skills and can articulate their thoughts, however it is a different skill to be able to break down a complex diagnosis or surgery and explain it in a clear and understandable language to a person who has no medical background. Maybe you can build upon the example you mentioned: "I have had to learn the art of communication (....) time to communicate with them." Instead of just mentioning an example of when you communicated with people, maybe provide and example of a time you educated a person and helped them to better understand a topic and how they responded to the situation.

Writing Feedback / Cars will be driven by computers not people in the near future. Positive or negative - ielts [5]

Interesting choice of topic. You did a great jobs of giving examples of you're thoughts however I would choose one side of the argument and state examples of why you agree or disagree with the new technology of self driving cars. It may be helpful to make an outline, write out all of the pros and cons of self driving cars and write down examples to back up the argument. This will allow for more organized ideas and a more freely flowing paper.