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Jul 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 2 - Same products around the world [3]
Hey,
You should only talk about one side. In your introduction, you consider it to be a positive development, so throughout your essay you should only be talking about the positive developments of having same products all around the world. As well, in your conclusion paragraph you should be restating your mentioned points and your thesis.
Hey,
You should only talk about one side. In your introduction, you consider it to be a positive development, so throughout your essay you should only be talking about the positive developments of having same products all around the world. As well, in your conclusion paragraph you should be restating your mentioned points and your thesis.
