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Posts by Fahri
Name: FAHRİ EKMEKCİOGLU
Joined: Aug 26, 2017
Last Post: Sep 21, 2017
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From: Turkey
School: Bilgi Universyt

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Fahri   
Sep 21, 2017
Writing Feedback / Materials printed on paper or given in an electronic form? I am working for Toefl Exam. [2]

The Question
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


researching materials form



Researching is important part of our lives. We face many subjects to do research in our daily life. These can be about job, education or other necessary things. Some people choose printed materials such as books and articles while researching. Also, some of them prefer internet. In my point of view using printed materials is not good choice. I always research by internet for two important reasons.

The main reason is that we can access the information that we need easily and rapidly with the help of internet. Accessing the information is not feasible everywhere. Many countries still have not enough libraries, schools and educational possibilities. The people who are living in there can't benefit from printed materials. However, internet can be widely used in many regions of countries. For example few years ago, I was living at the Kinik where is a small town of Antalya. I had limited time to present my homework to the school. I could not find any library to search about topic of homework. Because Kinik was very small town and hadn't any library. The only way was going to to center of Antalya for necessary resources. Center was so far from Kinik. With these circumstances I completed my homework by Google without going to center. As you can see, I was not able to present my homework easily if the internet doesn't exist.

Secondly using internet is beneficial for nature. People don't need a papers when they research from internet. Naturally , any reduction of the requirement of the paper will effects cutting trees positively. For example , I had researches about histroy of financial products. It was a project of the university. I used the library to found necessary books and magazines. Surprisingly the library did not share these materials for one week. Responsibles accepted just few hours to photocopy. Approximately , I took 150 pages of copies. This situation caused paper consumption. If they could share these books on the internet, papers was not counsumed for photocopy. This experience taught to me that using internet for researches helps to nature instead photocopy.

To summarize , according to me choosing internet is better to do research than is the use printed material. Internet using is good choice not only for easy access information but also beneficial for nature. Every body should use internet to do researches.
Fahri   
Sep 21, 2017
Writing Feedback / SAT essay, topic: Taking the responsibility [7]

@TatyanaMileva

I think you need to have more simple sentences. Using the words correctly is very important. You should learn what the structure must be for essays.
Fahri   
Aug 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Arrangement in Working Hours [3]

@Holt
Dear Holt, firstly thanks for your great ideas. I am going to interest the issues that you explain. Actually I was hesitate to share whole text in terms of web site's warnings. Thanks again.
Fahri   
Aug 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Arrangement in Working Hours [3]

working days in a week, and hours in a day



The article states that working normally people works in 5 days. It is planned that 8 hours in a day and totally 40 hours per week. It will be beneficial that arrangement in these hours like 10 hours a day and totally 4 days per week for 3 reasons. However speaker explains that working 4 day in a week is not usefull in terms of author's reasons.

First reading states that it is beneficial for business in terms of costs and savings. The author supports this idea by explaining cost of gas , vehicle expenditures. The speaker refutes this point. He states that these expenditures are not enough crucial for saving. He demonstrates the calculation of gas consumption. Approximately , 30 miles in a day becomes 150 miles in a week. Cost of this mile's is just 15 USD. This is not a huge saving and reason of this changing.

Second , the article claims that working 4 day in a week reasons to lower operational costs for companies. Fixed expenses like lighting, air condition will be lower. However the speaker says that it is a misguided situation. Fixed expenditures may decrease but it will be the reason of %20 business losting. Most potential customers who are going to work in one day will be lost.

Third ,the reading claims that spending one more day with familiy send back more work power to companies. Unlike this opinioun speaker explains that working 10 hours a day will be worse for family. Children will can see less their parents and it will conclude more stressfull for employers.
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