Undergraduate / Study Plan Letter - following a bachelor degree in Agricultural and Environmental Sciences at McGill [4]

Thanks, @Holt for your evaluation of my letter so far. I will definily take into consideration your review and make the nescessary changes. However, to that end I would like you to explain what do you mean by focal point of your studies? If you mean what area of biotech I will pursue when I graduate from college, I am not realy sure kkk. Could you explain it to me?

Why I am not erronling in my country's universities? Because, I am looking to have the best education possible, so I looked to study in the best Universities in the world, with the intent that, in the future, I could became a great scientist and contribute to the scientific endevour. Brazil has some great learning institutions but they still dont compare to those in the development world. The reason for that is the lack of goverment investement in education. That simple kkkk, many universities lack the nescessary equipment to function properly, and to teach their students. (I will try to explain this on my next draf).

Giving you some insite on me now, I probaly pretend on continuing my education and getting a Master or Phd. I plan on doing research, and probaly teaching or getting employed by some major Biotech company. Where and when I will pursue these I am not realy sure kkkk. (Is this my professional purpose of my studies?)

Writing Feedback / Violence and disaters images in the media, what are the causes and our solutions [3]

I dont think I am the right person to correct or give a feedback, but, anyways, with only good intentions here it comes: I believe that your resolution of the problem is a little to radical. I believe that your resolution should be more on the lines of the type of media people should consume and that they should be more selective on their content.

You were in the right track when you said:

the citizes should learn to think positive and do not believe immediately in news they read on the internet.

But try to use words like "discern" or "judge the validity of the information provided" you could also enter the subject of the fake news, and you should dig deaper in your causes. Ask questions like Why? How?

I hope I helped I little.