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Posts by AMOZ
Name: Amos Kiprotich
Joined: Jul 3, 2018
Last Post: Aug 31, 2018
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From: Kenya
School: MMUST

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AMOZ   
Aug 29, 2018
Scholarship / Work experience as an assistant laboratory technologist has helped in grounding my leadership skills [3]

Leadership and Influence question



My two years of work experience as an assistant laboratory technologist has helped in grounding my leadership skills. I joined XXX as an intern laboratory technician in the year 2016.upon joining the institution, two of my seniors transferred to different institution. I was left alone to manage the busiest laboratory in the institution. The laboratory serves the entire undergraduate and postgraduate science students and hence required a lot of organization. The challenge gave me an opportunity to plan in terms of allocating different practical sessions to different group, buying reagents for different sessions and coordinating the activities of the entire laboratory. I had to ensure that all the groups were gathered for and all the practical were done as per the outline. Through precise organization, I was able to effectively and successfully run the lab a lone for a duration of 6 months before being joined by a colleague whom I was tasked to train. My colleague and I have ensured that all the objectives of practical are met and the result has been an overall improvement on student grade. Moreover, having successfully demonstrated leadership and management skills in running of the laboratory, I was promoted as an assistant laboratory technologist, a position I hold to date.I strongly believe that Chevening scholarship will help in furthering my leadership skills and granting me the scholarship will make all this a reality.
AMOZ   
Jul 6, 2018
Scholarship / Why the awards panel should consider them for a Scholarship? LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP [5]

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I NEED HELP ON MY LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION BELOW



Why the awards panel should consider them for a Scholarship
My past experience as a member of a non-governmental organization dealing with bisexual and transgender individual place me at a better position to handle LGBTQ advocacy. I have developed a set of skills for handling LGBTQ problems and awareness both at community and undergraduate level. Often, my role was to promote awareness for gays and lesbian rights not only in the society but also in my undergraduate life. Therefore, the scholarship will help me to extend my passion for supporting LGBTQ advocacy in the new environment; reaching more LGBTQ and advancing my experience in the same field in an international environment. Further, I have knowledge about article writing on LGBTQ challenges, rights, and advocacy. Am eager to use the knowledge in my next environment which gives more light to have a future society where LGBTQ rights are recognized. Ultimately, I would love to achieve my educational goals while at the same time supporting my passion for LGBTQ program. My desire to achieve both goals will further inspire me to work hard and attain remarkable results. Basing on the above two objectives, I am confident that I am the best candidate for this scholarship.

My passion in fighting for LGBT rights was first sparked off when a gay colleague confided in me the many challenges and experiences they undergo. It was sad to learn that they face an elevated risk of harassment, violence, discrimination and solitary confinement. In an effort to try to help him, I thought it wise to inform the local organization which helped me to form advocacy group within the university. As a student leader, I convinced many people through the advocacy group to support civic education, and outreach, Education, and Research Program among others. I am proud to mention that by the first semester we had reached 50% of population and perception towards gays and lesbians raised from 5% to 60%. I love seeing the society which diversity and all peoples' rights are respected, and observed unequivocally especially for LGBTQ. Through listening, learning and loving I have come to note with concern that LGBTQ issues are a matter of life and death and there is need for advocacy.

Many gains have been made regarding LGBT equality by government policies, although the legislation does not mean awareness, intersectional and inclusivity. LGBTQ faces the same problem since societies are not aware of their rights. Therefore, I intend to change this culture by collaborating with OutRight Action International and Hivos People Unlimited who support leadership development equity and intellectual inquiry towards sexual orientation and gender identity. The group will welcome individuals with gender identities and sexual orientation and give them support, advocacy, empowerment, and resources. Additionally, we will facilitate LGBTQ visibility at xxxx University by promoting LGBTQ understanding and acceptance.

I believe that my studies at xxx would be invaluable to my current academic achievements and my future career goals. Learning in European Union will further my understanding concepts and reflect them in global perspective. Earning a degree from such a prestigious institution will open up more opportunities related to employment. Additionally, the knowledge and skills acquired will be used to solve challenges facing my community by providing ultimate resolution to the area under my specialization.
AMOZ   
Jul 6, 2018
Writing Feedback / Is internet helpful or not? A lot of people are addicted from it already. [3]

Hello,your essay is good .Consider improving by increasing your sample size of the number of people you are considering to interview.Additionally, you can also consider diversifying your sample ;sometimes interview people closer to you will not give you the best feedback.Their response might be biased.Note also that for this essay it is appropriate to give your findings and acknowledge the sources and not necessarily the methods you used in gathering the information unless the essay prompts required that you give the methodology.I hope this can help.Good luck
AMOZ   
Jul 4, 2018
Scholarship / Relevant work experience to commerce [3]

Hi, I read your essay and to me I feel you have not adequately addressed the question prompt.You have highlighted only your job duties but not the mentoring and training aspect of prompt.Kindly consider reviewing it to address this aspect.
AMOZ   
Jul 3, 2018
Scholarship / Why the awards panel should consider them for a Scholarship? LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP [5]

LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION



Why the awards panel should consider them for a Scholarship

I am writing to apply for this interesting LGBTQ scholarship at your institution. I believe this opportunity is best for me and more importantly to the best interest of the society. I believe that am a right candidate for this scholarship because am a very hardworking person who is ready to successfully achieve the objective of the program. I recognize the invaluable role of education in my life, and I will be extremely grateful to be given a chance to advance my education while attempting to fulfill my passion for promoting advocacy for LGBTQ. Also, I always attempt to improve society by doing volunteer task. To support this, I am a member of a non-governmental community dealing with Bisexual and Transgender Pride program. This organization promotes awareness for gays and lesbian rights and respect for the community. We also, publish an article promoting the same philosophy because we stand for inequality and diversity. Basing on the above facts, passion as well as my intention to advance in the same field, I feel that am the best candidate for this scholarship.
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