Posts by asepmylocal

asepmylocal

Aug 9, 2018

Writing Feedback / INTRODUCE MY JOB AND FAMILY [3]

you're right, my English is very simple. Thanks for your corrections and recommendations.

@jalp
The family is something that is very precious to me because nothing can replace the role of the family in this world. I come from a big family. I have two older brothers and six older sisters so I am the youngest in the family. I have a wife and a son. My wife three years younger. My wife is a woman who is very patient and diligent in taking care of the family. She is not only a housewife but also she is the best chef because she always cooks delicious food for us. My son is just three years old. I am very close to my family. We have lunch together every weekend.

asepmylocal

Aug 9, 2018

Writing Feedback / INTRODUCE MY JOB AND FAMILY [3]

JOB

I am a programmer. I work in technology of transportation. I work for the Agency for assesment and application of technology. I built web-based information system, desktop and mobile application using PHP, java, C++ and other Language programming. I used SQL Server, MySQL and PostgreSQL as Database management system. I developed some applications such as e-parking, quick response information system and railway monitoring system. It is very challenging work and it can be exhausting because the problem of every project is very different.

FAMILY

Family is something that is very precious for me because nothing can replace the role of the family in this world. My family consist of two person, they are my wife and son. My wife is woman who is very petient and diligent in taking care of the family. She is not only a housewife but also she is the best chef because she always cooks delicious food for us.

asepmylocal

Aug 6, 2018

Writing Feedback / Experiences of official travel [4]

@Holt
This article is the first time for me. I am sorry my grammar is not good and I has learned english, thank you very much for your corrections.

@jiayun223
Thanks for your corrections, Thanks a lot

asepmylocal

Aug 2, 2018

Research Papers / Genetic Editing for Cystic Fibrosis Argumentative Essay for ENG 102 [2]

a critic fibrosis decribe about the ruthless disease which happened in 1962. The story which explan about a young child struggle.

asepmylocal

Aug 2, 2018

Writing Feedback / Experiences of official travel [4]

MY travel to Pekalongan city

I with my coworks went official travel to Pekalongan city on july 10th, 2018. They were mr. Triwidodo, sahid, and gilang. We did office jobs during 4 days 3 nights started from 10th-13th of july, 2018. We went there by train from gambir station to pekalongan station and it take about 4 hours. Mr. Triwidodo bought hokben food as stock for lunch on the train. Alhamdulillah, the travel was running smoothly and we stayed at santika hotel which located was right in front of pekalongan station.