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Sep 4, 2018
Scholarship / Biomedical engineer - Personal statement - I'm interested to apply for KGSP scholarship [4]
Hello there from Indonesia,
Since I want to apply for this scholarship too, I have to address you over your weaknesses.
Firstly, when I was reading along your essay, I was seeing someone who showed their achievements and great commendations but lack of contribution. Try to reckon as the scholarship committee and think about these questions thoroughly and with a vengeance,
Are they looking for someone who have myriad achievements but lack of social sensitivity or a scholar who have good commendations yet own high social awareness?
Moreover, I only see the interest of Korea but not the impact of it to your study, future, or any aspects within yourself though. This should be considered as well.
Despite your top-notch awards, I have not seen any specific award in which it is align to your future. Here you also did not bring your big picture goal about what you want to be as it will beneficially connect to your study plan for sure.
Last but not least, I suppose you to be little bit aware to your social neighbourhood as it is your chance to build your great essay after all.
Hello there from Indonesia,
Since I want to apply for this scholarship too, I have to address you over your weaknesses.
Firstly, when I was reading along your essay, I was seeing someone who showed their achievements and great commendations but lack of contribution. Try to reckon as the scholarship committee and think about these questions thoroughly and with a vengeance,
Are they looking for someone who have myriad achievements but lack of social sensitivity or a scholar who have good commendations yet own high social awareness?
Moreover, I only see the interest of Korea but not the impact of it to your study, future, or any aspects within yourself though. This should be considered as well.
Despite your top-notch awards, I have not seen any specific award in which it is align to your future. Here you also did not bring your big picture goal about what you want to be as it will beneficially connect to your study plan for sure.
Last but not least, I suppose you to be little bit aware to your social neighbourhood as it is your chance to build your great essay after all.