lennonmenace
Feb 8, 2021
Writing Feedback / Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? [3]
Although you have included relevant examples from experience that are apt on a more individual level, you should look at more examples that have been successful to curb obesity globally. This needs to be researched and incorporated in the essay. I believe it would make your prompt stronger and well researched. Here are some examples I could think of :
1. Tax- Countries have implemented tax on fattening foods- you might want to look at this and see if something like this was effective
2. Food Labels- There are policies in countries around labels to help consumers understand what they're eating
3. Education and communication strategies: Any educational interventions that have been successful in preventing obesity.
Although you have included relevant examples from experience that are apt on a more individual level, you should look at more examples that have been successful to curb obesity globally. This needs to be researched and incorporated in the essay. I believe it would make your prompt stronger and well researched. Here are some examples I could think of :
1. Tax- Countries have implemented tax on fattening foods- you might want to look at this and see if something like this was effective
2. Food Labels- There are policies in countries around labels to help consumers understand what they're eating
3. Education and communication strategies: Any educational interventions that have been successful in preventing obesity.