Scholarship / Master of Mgt-Why are the skills and knowledge you describe important to your country development? [2]

good management is really needed

Hello,
I am applying the scholarship for Master of Management, please provide your comment on my following essay:

Lao PRD is working with Australia's government to support HRD capacities building as it is one of the priority elements to driven country's development. The government project in Laos lacks management capacities, a limit number of staffs in these sectors have qualification in this area; Thus, we surely need more graduator who have strongly international management qualification.

Most of public and private organization especially government project needs effective management to create direction and drive the organization to achieve the goal by organizes and integrated the resources. Management skill can be applied to various field works. Regarding to my working experience, it requires need especially my works are to coordinate and deal with many people both internal and external, it requires skill and technique on it. Therefore, management are really need and important to my work because makes a difficult task easier, critical thinking by avoiding wastage of time, budget and effort. I would like to be a good role model woman who working with the men in the ministry to show that women can get high promotion if they have strong capacities and work hard on it.

For that reason, I am strongly confident that my qualification in management in XXXXX gives an opportunity to discover my leadership and management skill to make improvement on country's development. I really believe I can be to bring new skill and to apply in real workplace to contribution to my community, as well as at national level.

Scholarship / Master of Management - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your proposed study? [2]

Hello everyone,

please kindly to suggest and comment on my scholarship application

Question One
What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your proposed study? (max. 250 words)

international qualification for a successful career

It's my desire and willingness to study Master of Management at XXXXXX because of the university offer the top reputation of courses in management area in depth and attract my interested. I strong expected to enhance knowledge, skill and capabilities particularly in interpersonal communication, to understand organization behavior, to create strategic management, leading, planning, organizing, coordination, controlling and changing organization, critically evaluate the key concepts and theories of sustainability. Moreover, one of very interesting subject is project management; which opened my door to develop project documents, evaluate project management framework, timeline, tools and technique. This course would be impact on my career, it allows me to run my job and my organization forward successfully.

Another course that I am ready and passionate in is Master of Management in XXXXXX. This course would help me to apply theories background to practical way in management working area. It prepared me lead, to respond working professional and self-management in complex situation, to work effectively with external and internal by communication professionally using productive way, to address complex management issue and development solution when needed. Those skill and capacities mentioned are the most that related with my job and that would to help setting organization's goal.

Even though I have local master's degree but it's not good enough standard; it's just about general business. I realize that I need stronger international qualification to create successful career and it can transferable to serve my community and my country respectively.

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