Unanswered [14] | Urgent [0]
  

Posts by HuongT [Suspended]
Name: Tran Thi Thanh Huong
Joined: May 12, 2019
Last Post: May 13, 2019
Threads: 1
Posts: 1  
Likes:
From: Việt Nam
School: NUCE

Displayed posts: 2
sort: Latest first   Oldest first  | 
HuongT   
May 13, 2019
Writing Feedback / Spending too much time on video games than sports - IELTS [2]

There are is a myriad of grounds for spend spending excessive amounts of time on computer-based games.
There + is + a/an Noun. for + Ving excessive amounts of time (nouns phrase) so you must use 'spending'.
'Screen' is a countable noun so you must add a/the/...
HuongT   
May 12, 2019
Writing Feedback / The best holiday ever (Say where you went and what you saw, and explain why it was the best holiday) [2]

travel to the Japanese pagoda



When the new year holiday of last year, I were working in Japan so I travelled to the Japanese pagoda for sightseeing. I travelled alone because my colleagues and friends go home to Vietnam.

The pagoda is on an island far 100 kilometers from my flat. I went to this place by fair and lost over 800 Japanese yen. My smartphone could not access the internet because I did not register so for careful preparation, I searched and saved maps of the way from my home to the destination. It was so easy to go to the pagoda. At the gate, I took a picture of the pagoda map so I could sightsee spectacular landscapes and monumental architect completely and quickly. I took a lot of pictures of my journey collections.

But, I was in trouble with my phone, suddenly it turned off, I tried to restart it but useless. I really worried, I thought my picture will be lost, and at that moment, I did not have the map to go home.

By something I could remember and asking some visitors, I cameback to the port and went home at 16 o'clock.
Writing
Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳