angaquay
May 28, 2019
Writing Feedback / In any field - those in power should step down after five years [3]
I will give you 5 out of 6. Length,word choice, style is good. A wide range of vocab was used. But you still have made some spelling error. For example, in the first sentence of the essay part, it should be "have witnessed" not " have witness". I think you need to work on your phrase. You may wish to use a thesaurus to reduce your usage of the following words and/or phrases in your essay: because, many, and so, well, more, easy, any, is, but...Hope that my comment would be constructive
I will give you 5 out of 6. Length,word choice, style is good. A wide range of vocab was used. But you still have made some spelling error. For example, in the first sentence of the essay part, it should be "have witnessed" not " have witness". I think you need to work on your phrase. You may wish to use a thesaurus to reduce your usage of the following words and/or phrases in your essay: because, many, and so, well, more, easy, any, is, but...Hope that my comment would be constructive