Writing Feedback / Wild animals have no use in the 21st century - is preserving them just a waste of resources? [3]

the relationship between human and animals

IELTS Writing Task 2
Wild animals have no use in the 21st century and trying to preserve animals now is just wastage of money.

In modern society, there is a perspective that animals have not had useful value so that protecting animals is not worthy and cost a lot of money. It seems there is a little element truth in it, However, in my opinion, conserving animals equals to the development of human beings. If all animals are extinct, the last one must be human.

In the spite of the prosperity of automatic machine, we much less rely on animals to hunt and grow grains in agriculture than we used to in the past, instead of few places where it is far away from the cities. As a result, every year people spend a lot of money on nature reserve in preserving them. The other side is quite opposite. Animals are vital for keeping the biodiversity including human beings. Due to the interaction with distinctive animals, the ecosystem remains on a balanced condition. For instance, people eat fishes and fishes catch shrimps and shrimps get microorganism. Biodiversity help all creature in a harmonious situation.

On the other hand, animals are enough smart so that they have many emotion in common with people .To illustrate, grief occurred many animals when their child and participants died ,seeing the body in the sad eye. Even though many scientists have not admitted that animals can create grief. There is a great deal of truth that love can be seen by heart.

What is more, there will have much more discoveries found by people to help us cope with the relationship between human and animals. Nevertheless, with the development of science, we have made strides in exploring from Satellites to undersea. Undeniably, animals provided a lot of materials to human. Meanwhile ,greenhouse warming and environment pollution caused by human have an enormous impact on animals, with the loss of nature inhabitant and the decease of food. To some extent, the protection of animals is also to help ourselves

In summary, with more and more serious influence on animals, human should be obliged to keep on wild animals in the proper amount and diversity. Though life is limited,human must benefit for the next generation.

Writing Feedback / No advertisement in the world [3]

ad-bombing of consumers

Have you ever formed a picture of life in ancient time without advertisement. It sounds odd and incredible. Looking around the world that we live in, it is surrounded by advertisement from all kinds of products to online application services giving rise to different types of advertisement, for instance , cold call, pop-ups and direct Mails. Even though we enjoy gaining extreme immense information from the adverts, the other side is quite opposite. It leads to many social problems, to illustrate, the invasion of privacy, for the costumer data was released to target products. As a result, many people are intrusive by a large number of cold calls, as it was did in the case of one of my relatives who received a great many of telesales about decoration and furniture as soon as she had just bought a new flat.

Apart from it, many people are suspicious of the quality of product which effects are real or not. As long as consumers have used for a long time, they will distinguish it. What is more, in china there are innocent consumers who had a cancer then they found the therapy from internet advertisement later they died from the wrong treatment. It has came about a huge stream about the medical ads. It seems that the advantage from ads are not equal to the disadvantage of it. So if you imagine there is no advertisement in the world, what the world will become?

Maybe a great majority of residents lead a more simple life in the homeland where they buy and sell though the word of mouths without attractive and colorful flyers and TV commercials. The artificial wants will exempt from the elementary needs especially consumer-driven lifestyle. Hence, people may concentrate on creative activities more than buying a lot of unused products.

Do you imagine the problem?