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Name: emily
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Aug 9, 2019
Writing Feedback / Effects of detailed crime descriptions [2]

@Winter
Hello ! hope you find comment helpful:
The overall structure is clear. Just little suggestion here.
Undeniably, crime rate is on the increase rising/increasing
pollute children's mind cause children to develop aggressive tendency.
htc   
Aug 3, 2019
Writing Feedback / Railway transportation will improve traffic congestion and reduce air pollution problem [3]

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads


To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is my first post on the forum. I am looking forward to your comment. Thank you for your time.

In my opinion, the government should implement more resources to construct traffic facilities rather than traffic roads. The benefit of implementing railway traffic not only solve the traffic congestion problem but also improve the environment.

It is an inevitable fact that railway transportation system would shorten the traveling time of the commuters and help to resolve the traffic congestion problem. The traffic congestion problem is a very common phenomenon in different cities especially during the period of citizens traveling to work and students goes to school.

Another benefit of railway transportation is that it will relive the pollution problem. As the air quality will be seriously affected by road traffic. Many cars especially diesel vehicles on the road will definitely soar the level of carbon emission and emerge air pollution issue. In the long run, it would seriously emerge physical health problem such as chronic respiratory diseases, high blood pressure and asthma etc. Railway transportation will certainly improve air pollution problem.

In consideration of railway transportation will improve traffic congestion and air pollution problem. The environment of the city would improve as well. The government is suggested to implement more facilities of railway transportation.
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