Scholarship / Seeking advises and on the Chevening leadership essay - how I meet requirement for scholarship [2]

@yelsh9

Hello yelsh,

First of all, good luck in your chevening application.

Your essay looks great but you need to apply some simple steps to give it a good shape.

The essay structure needs to be better. Introduction, body and conclusion

The introduction must be on one or two skill in leadership that you think are effective in your life.

In the body I suggest you use on of the techniques to make your examples clear: CAR (Case, Action, result) technique or STARL (Situation, Task, Action, Result) technique. They must be in order and they must be clear.

The conclusion your opinion, hopes for future...etc.

Each paragraph should be composed of not less than three complete lines to make it look good and appealing to the reading committee.

Hope I was useful.

Thanks

Scholarship / The brave, judgment, strong and honest... Assessment of Chevening leadership and influence essay [3]

@tidy7353

Dear Tidy,

First of all, good luck in your chevening application.

Your essay looks great but you need to apply some simple steps to give it a good shape.

The essay structure needs to be better. Introduction, body and conclusion

The introduction must be on one or two skill in leadership that you think are effective in your life.

In the body I suggest you use on of the techniques to make your examples clear: CAR (Case, Action, result) technique or STARL (Situation, Task, Action, Result) technique. They must be in order and they must be clear.

The conclusion your opinion, hopes for future...etc.

Each paragraph should be composed of not less than three complete lines to make it look good and appealing to the reading committee.

Hope I was useful.

Thanks

Scholarship / The key parts of my characters - Chevening leadership 2019 [5]

Dear Omnia,

Firstly, good luck in your chevening application.

My main advice for you is to be "to the point", please refrain from using too many words of the same meaning.

For example, in the first paragraph, start by choosing on Leadership skill and say why you think it is important.

Then in the second part list an example, or two, of how you succeeded in implementing this skill in your professional and/or educational capacity.

The third paragraph should be for conclusion or result

By this you'll answer the question perfectly..