Undergraduate /
Multicultural affairs - Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University? [3]
i think the essay was good and very emotive, however, I hope you don't mind my edits.
... a multicultural learning environment largely influenced my application. Hailing from a multicultural background myself, it is important to me to be a part of an institute which is considerate of me. I was born ... I believe
that everyone, regardless of race, religion, gender, or social class deserves equal respect and opportunity.
Unfortunately, the environment I grew up in viewed my values as truculent and employment opportunities were tendentious as a result. For the most part, schools were segregated and most religious ... Resultantly, I spent most ... sermon would take place for my community's version of Islam was not acceptable in the country and had to be held in a different location every week.
... at the University. ... and events were directed ... at on campus, exactly what ...
I hope to encourage ... dialogue whilst expressing myself in a manner true to personal beliefs. Be it whilst studying Human Development or attending one of the university's many basketball games, I believe that Syracuse will give ... could not, to exercise my faith and engage in multilateral knowledge sharing and creation.
