Writing Feedback / New stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures [2]

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Essay-1:
New stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?

Ans:
It is a fact that pictures are accompanied by televisions and newspapers these days. Many people like this approach of presenting pictures about the stories. In my opinion, these are indeed helpful in describing the moral and thoughts of the stories. Also, it is more valuable than words.

Pictures are so handy nowadays to present the stories in short. To elaborate this, it is a tendency of people to go through the drawings and pictures before go deep into the stories described in media. Also, these are always the point of attraction to all ages of the people. Every one of us always attracted towards the picture and try to understand the meaning behind it.

Further, children are fond of looking at the fascinated drawings and pictures. They innate many thoughts and ideas looking at the pictures shown in newspapers or television. For them, picture is the first impression before the stories. Hence, this plays an important role in case of the youngsters. In addition to this, many writers and entrepreneurs agree with the viewpoint about the importance of a picture in real world. According to them, pictures carry many words and offer outlook of the story.

To recapitulate, it is undeniable that pictures play key role behind the stories as it narrates the moral and sensitive details of the stories. According to me, words would be too lengthy and time consuming to elaborate the whole story; whereas through pictures one can explain the viewpoint of the story in short.

Writing Feedback / Applicants' personal data are valuable to the employers to figure out certain requirements and goals [2]

Employers sometime ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the extra information about a job seeker

It is a fact that in most of the employment forms we observe many fields to be filled up by the employees such as their hobbies, interest, marital status. To some people these fields seem meaningless for a job interview. However, these are indeed valuable to the employers to figure out their certain requirements and goals towards the benefits of the organizations.

There are numerous advantages to the employers for assessments with such basic personal information. To state a few, it helps an interviewer to understand the area of interests of the interviewee. It also enables the employer to analyse the abilities and qualities of the candidate. By doing so, employers also aggregate how beneficial the candidate for the respective job.

In addition, we all know that married persons also have many more responsibilities other than their work life. There could be many unavoidable reasons for them to quit jobs or migrate places which has a direct impact in the long run of the company benefits. By checking the status of the person could help the employers to organize structure and planning which would be beneficial for the company.

On the other side of the coin, some short-sighted people argue that this additional information are less relevant for the job interviews. Even they also put their views by adding that these are just attention seekers to get recruited in the market. Moreover, it is undeniable that a candidate should be sound in technical aspects, more appropriate to the nature of the job.

To recapitulate, though technical knowledge plays a key role in case of a job requirement, however, the additional information show a good view to the employers to pick right candidates for the job considering the objective and requirements of their organizations. I strongly assert this viewpoint of sharing valuable details.