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Oct 6, 2009
Undergraduate / There are two things that I love about life - UMD essays [4]
i revised the second essay. is this one better? thanks!
Sometimes I can not believe how little I really know about the world. I only know what I am surrounded by, and that is a typical, suburban-living, high school life. I have not been exposed to much outside of this, and I know I need to be. Mentally, I have matured very quickly, and it did not take long for me to realize how much life I am missing out on by being fastened to my sheltered existence. My viewpoint of life is very narrow, but with potential to be very wide.
What I need is perspective. While I know I am an intelligent person and have developed plenty of knowledge to understand some of the most crucial and meaningful aspects of the world, there are some things I can not say I fully comprehend until I have experienced them. I want to indulge in ways of life other than my own, and I want to put my current life in perspective by experiencing much more exciting, confusing, depressing, exhilarating, and important events and emotions. By taking my first steps into adulthood at the University of Maryland, I feel that I will be able to take advantage of many opportunities, both in my studies and outside of the classroom, to expand my viewpoint and help break the mold I have been living in.
Thinking about what I have yet to see and learn and do, I am beside myself with anxiety and excitement. There is nothing more important to me than living a full life and taking advantage of everything I can in order to be happy, wise, and full of experience. I need my routine life to be shaken by something that will re-spark the momentum of figuring out who I am, and I feel that in my college experience at Maryland, I will get my fill of shaking, and therefore, learn so much more about the world and myself.
i revised the second essay. is this one better? thanks!
Sometimes I can not believe how little I really know about the world. I only know what I am surrounded by, and that is a typical, suburban-living, high school life. I have not been exposed to much outside of this, and I know I need to be. Mentally, I have matured very quickly, and it did not take long for me to realize how much life I am missing out on by being fastened to my sheltered existence. My viewpoint of life is very narrow, but with potential to be very wide.
What I need is perspective. While I know I am an intelligent person and have developed plenty of knowledge to understand some of the most crucial and meaningful aspects of the world, there are some things I can not say I fully comprehend until I have experienced them. I want to indulge in ways of life other than my own, and I want to put my current life in perspective by experiencing much more exciting, confusing, depressing, exhilarating, and important events and emotions. By taking my first steps into adulthood at the University of Maryland, I feel that I will be able to take advantage of many opportunities, both in my studies and outside of the classroom, to expand my viewpoint and help break the mold I have been living in.
Thinking about what I have yet to see and learn and do, I am beside myself with anxiety and excitement. There is nothing more important to me than living a full life and taking advantage of everything I can in order to be happy, wise, and full of experience. I need my routine life to be shaken by something that will re-spark the momentum of figuring out who I am, and I feel that in my college experience at Maryland, I will get my fill of shaking, and therefore, learn so much more about the world and myself.