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Posts by kathleenjeanne
Name: Kathleen J
Joined: Jan 4, 2020
Last Post: Jan 4, 2020
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School: gloria christian school

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kathleenjeanne   
Jan 4, 2020
Undergraduate / UBC Personal Profile: Importance of a Balanced Life [3]

Hi Famai!
First of all, this essay is has an incredible choice of vocabulary, very organized and highly personal - which I believe is what UBC looks for. However (I know this might sound awful) I heard from my friends who applied for UBC that this University is not fond of talks about mental issues. Despite your well-rounded essay, I think it would be better if you use other examples! I am also applying for UBC and Lina Lecompte'sy Youtube videos helps a lot! She mentioned something about using mental health issues as your topic, you should definitely try checking it out!
kathleenjeanne   
Jan 4, 2020
Undergraduate / UBC Personal Profile essay - About my aspirations and describing myself [2]

who am i?



I am a highly-motivated and ambitious individual with a great passion in pursuing a balanced and fulfilling life. Growing up, I witnessed my parents struggle with monetary issues and discrimination. Regardless, my parents were incredibly tenacious in their work and have been relentless in being excellent, pious caregivers for their children. As a result, I got heavily influenced by their devotion and was enveloped by a strong determination to establish a secure haven for my family while channeling that energy to infuse inspiration to those around me.

Although my aspirations were supported by my family's robust belief and dedication, I had once spiraled into uncertainty during my youth. To re-incite confidence and assurance, I had embarked on a long journey and my curious nature and eagerness to learn have contributed a lot. They pushed me to join many activities, ranging from debate club to community services outside of school; consequently, allowing people to describe me as a mature, responsible person who values growth, changes and the diversity of perspectives.

During this quest, I learned that it is crucial to always strive in being a dynamic person who conducts everything with diligence. I am also glad to have discovered my integrity and voice as I surround myself with interesting and empowering people. In the end, I realized that journeys ought to be tiring, yet I am proud to have held a faith along the way - what we see now is but a pebble, whereas larger rocks are still waiting ahead.
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