hmphuongg
Mar 31, 2020
Writing Feedback / Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. [3]
I have some notes for you :
- You did not write enough 250 words
- In the introduction, you did not give your opinion
- Firstly, secondly, thirdly,... not first, second, third,..
- You wrote too many points, but focus on none of them ( such as racial discrimination,the tuition fee). Instead, you should choose one and just write about that.
- Your conclusion was too general, it had to include all the point that you had written before
I have some notes for you :
- You did not write enough 250 words
- In the introduction, you did not give your opinion
- Firstly, secondly, thirdly,... not first, second, third,..
- You wrote too many points, but focus on none of them ( such as racial discrimination,the tuition fee). Instead, you should choose one and just write about that.
- Your conclusion was too general, it had to include all the point that you had written before
