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Posts by Luana
Name: Trịnh Thị Mỹ Duyên
Joined: Mar 17, 2020
Last Post: Apr 30, 2020
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From: Viet Nam
School: Van Lang University

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Luana   
Apr 30, 2020
Writing Feedback / First impressions are important. Doing well in interviews is the key to job security. [3]

First impressions are important


Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that when someone has to interview in any company, so the first impression is the best way to get the job. It is agreed that first impressions are always useful to get and develop the work. This essay will discuss, firstly getting a great job and second, making many good relationships, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

An impressed certificate may be able to be good, but to make employers remembers yourself through the first meeting is more essential because it is the chance to get a great job. Especially, when employees want to find jobs related to the business field because first impressions can create or break a business. A prime example of this is interviewing a new career after graduating or losing the old job. When employees interview a position in the event agency, the employers will judge how the employees present themselves and your venture in public, how they communicate with colleagues and clients, and so on. Hence, making a good first attractive is particularly important and is the best point to receive a good job.

First impressions are also able to make a lot of relationships that have benefits for the career. When the employee has to meet the potential clients to exchange or persuade them to agree with the contract, he needs to create a good impression in the first actions. After that, these customers will have good attitudes with this employee and this company, they maybe share and introduce the best services of the company for their kinship, neighborhoods.

In conclusion, the first impressions will likely become the chances of finding a great job and creating more and more relationships. And almost people agree that is essential that you take the time to get it right in the first instant.
Luana   
Apr 30, 2020
Letters / "Hectic visit" - Write a letter to your friend. [6]

Dear Zoya,

I hope everything is ...

... cookies, while they ...
I realized the kitchen was filled with smoke
... was out, so I cleaned up ...
... in its place, by the time ...

... happened, but I did not want to ...
... at me instead, she was happy ...

I think you need to consider some punctuation in compound/complex sentences and passive voice misuse. I hope my suggests will be useful.
Luana   
Apr 14, 2020
Writing Feedback / Compare and contrast essay: Online learning and traditional learning [3]

choosing a studying method



Nearly, all people around the world have to be affected by a coronavirus, which has changed everything including education. So the presidents of schools notice that they will change the way to teach from traditional learning to online learning. There are two distinctions between the two teaching methods like instructional materials and flexibility.

One of the most differences between e-learning and traditional learning is instructional materials. Learning through the internet requires learners who have a basic knowledge about technology to use power-point, join online class, or do the assignment on the internet. Moreover, during studying on the internet, learners have to know the graphics which include icons, symbols, photos, and illustrations to support online learning. For instance, students can try and find a way to make animated videos for their online representation and attract modern learners. On the other hand, traditional learning brings to learners some experiences that e-learning is not. First one, when students study at the school, they will chance to come to laboratories, workshops, clinics on the campus. Next, the teachers are easy to observe their students following the content of the lesson, giving them the best instructions through books, notes a direct way. Therefore, instructional materials are the primary difference between online learning and traditional learning.

The online learning and traditional learning distinguish because flexibility which brings for students. With e-learning. Pupils can learn online courses even if they are at home or in the workplace. Wherever they go, or wherever they do, students might also access and complete their assigned projects with a good internet connection. Pupils could control a suitable time to participate in the class more analytical or critical skills in a particular domain. For example, if the student were an internship, she or he can learn the advanced level of JavaScript to be used in programming while doing a job. Traditional learning; however, is not flexible like online learning and making the pupils more difficult to study because of the rigid schedules in colleges and universities. So the students have to arrange their time a suitable way to follow the class. The learners must attend obligatory subjects but they are not convenient. Hence, online-learning is more flexibility than traditional learning

In brief, between online learning and traditional learning individuals should be careful when choosing a studying method. If students need to give a choice, they should choose online learning because it makes many advantages for them.
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