ede2011031
May 22, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2 - The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens health [8]
@Roman,
I appreciate your style of paraphrasing.
@Roman,
I appreciate your style of paraphrasing.
ede2011031
Apr 13, 2020
Scholarship / Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? Master of Engineering (by Research) [3]
@Holt
Thank you so much for your feedback and necessary corrections. Your guidance is so much relevant and I look forward the same in the future.
@Holt
Thank you so much for your feedback and necessary corrections. Your guidance is so much relevant and I look forward the same in the future.
ede2011031
Apr 13, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 2 - Most of world's problems are caused by over-population. [4]
Rewrite the topic on your own words in the introduction and mention what are the key reasons you are going to discuss.
Rewrite the topic on your own words in the introduction and mention what are the key reasons you are going to discuss.
ede2011031
Apr 13, 2020
Scholarship / Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? Master of Engineering (by Research) [3]
Master of Engineering (by Research) offers the opportunity to undertake supervised research of our choice and interest that develops a wide range of skills, including independent thinking, project management, data analysis, critical thinking, and refined communication skills. The course also offers the opportunity to learn how to develop a hypothesis and design experiments to test them and to analyze, write about and publish scientific data. With these aims in the mind, the key objectives of choosing the program are to personally and professionally develop knowledge of research methodology and techniques appropriate to my field of study, relevant to my organization and country, and experience in the application of such methodology by conducting a specified program of research under appropriate supervision. Besides, it will develop skills in analyzing literature and engaging in debate in the substantive area of the thesis topic at an advanced level.
The Swinburne University of Technology offers and fosters the programs that are trusted and leader in research excellence, who is determined to create a real-world impact that transforms the global and local communities for the better. It is a large and culturally diverse organization that is an internationally recognized research-intensive university that is focused on delivering research that creates economic and social impact. The researchers from the university produce innovative research solutions to real-world problems across a range of disciplines and sectors. With the qualification and outstanding world-changing research from Swinburne, the students can go anywhere in the world preparing the graduates to works for the biggest and the best. The standing in prestigious world academic ranking lists reflects the commitment to high-quality teaching and research and graduate outcomes with outstanding research achievements has set the priority of my choice and preference.
Application for master at The Swinburne University of Technology
Master of Engineering (by Research) offers the opportunity to undertake supervised research of our choice and interest that develops a wide range of skills, including independent thinking, project management, data analysis, critical thinking, and refined communication skills. The course also offers the opportunity to learn how to develop a hypothesis and design experiments to test them and to analyze, write about and publish scientific data. With these aims in the mind, the key objectives of choosing the program are to personally and professionally develop knowledge of research methodology and techniques appropriate to my field of study, relevant to my organization and country, and experience in the application of such methodology by conducting a specified program of research under appropriate supervision. Besides, it will develop skills in analyzing literature and engaging in debate in the substantive area of the thesis topic at an advanced level.
The Swinburne University of Technology offers and fosters the programs that are trusted and leader in research excellence, who is determined to create a real-world impact that transforms the global and local communities for the better. It is a large and culturally diverse organization that is an internationally recognized research-intensive university that is focused on delivering research that creates economic and social impact. The researchers from the university produce innovative research solutions to real-world problems across a range of disciplines and sectors. With the qualification and outstanding world-changing research from Swinburne, the students can go anywhere in the world preparing the graduates to works for the biggest and the best. The standing in prestigious world academic ranking lists reflects the commitment to high-quality teaching and research and graduate outcomes with outstanding research achievements has set the priority of my choice and preference.