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Posts by GiangDao
Name: Đào Thị Trúc Giang
Joined: Apr 26, 2020
Last Post: Apr 29, 2020
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From: Viet Nam
School: Nguyen Tat Thanh College

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GiangDao   
Apr 29, 2020
Writing Feedback / Essays about benefits of smartphone [4]

advices => advances
advances is in the smartphone
Although
have a nagative impact on our lives => to harm our lives
First of all, smartphone => the smartphone or a smartphone
attracted by smartphone => the smartphone or a smartphone
us to chat or even video call => s to chat or even video calls
we can satisfy our thirsty
the smartphone is search => the search or a search
thousands of
which have has been accumulated
has its a downside
GiangDao   
Apr 26, 2020
Writing Feedback / Essay about few languages are increasing in use, while the use of many other languages is declining. [3]

the domination of some main languages



There are roughly 6,500 spoken languages in this world today, according to statistics 23 languages account for more than half the global is popular. While the use of other languages is decreasing. I agree with the former which is positive outweigh the negative development

On the one hand, the fact that multiple countries share some common languages has some substantial benefits. First and foremost, can communication between people from different countries. For instance, business persons knowing the English language are statistically more prosperous in their business because the can understand what the partner is saying. The secondly, this is a big opportunity interesting things in a foreign land, have the opportunity to study the world is leading education like the United Kingdom or the United States, This is the reason why the ability to speak English or other languages that have global functionality is a necessary skill in the modern world.

On the other hand, use a less popular languages has several drawbacks. First of all, we do not deny that preserving the national language is necessary, the building is impossible to keep up with progress, as many countries with strong economics thanks to popular languages such as Singapore, Viet Nam, Korea. However, employers are willing to pay up to 30 percent higher for English speaking candidates for someone who does not speak a mother tongue, the starting point for income is also lower

In conclusion, although the domination of some languages has had the advantages, the importance of other languages should not be neglected. I believe that know the common languages can raise the value of nations cultures and their prosperity in education
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