giangianguyen67
Jun 23, 2020
Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY about the purpose of Television (to entertain) [3]
your essay easy to understand and you write clearly
your essay easy to understand and you write clearly
giangianguyen67
Jun 23, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2 WRITING: SHOULD THE GOVERNMENT PAY FOR THE CLEANING UP POLLUTION OF INDIVIDUALS? [4]
you need to write enough the number of words for the IELTS task 2 because it makes you lose from 0.5 to 1 score.
you need to write enough the number of words for the IELTS task 2 because it makes you lose from 0.5 to 1 score.
giangianguyen67
Jun 23, 2020
Student Talk / Requirements for IELTS Writing Tasks (Academic). How strict and true are they? [4]
I usually put the "overview" at the beginning because it helps everyone easily imagine the task before reading the body instead of putting this at the end. The number of people used the overview above higher than below. But actually, both ways are correct.
I usually put the "overview" at the beginning because it helps everyone easily imagine the task before reading the body instead of putting this at the end. The number of people used the overview above higher than below. But actually, both ways are correct.
giangianguyen67
Jun 20, 2020
Writing Feedback / The charts below show the proportion of people's total spending in a particular European country [3]
The two pie charts compare the percentage of resident's sum expenditure on six categories of goods and services in a European country over two separate years( 1958 and 2008).
Overall, it is evident that the amount of money was allocated for all aspects, except clothing, changing quite significantly over a 50-year period.
it can be seen from the charts, food accounted for the highest proportion of people's spending with 32% in 1958. However, this figure fell considerably to only 12% fifty years later. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at the luxury goods segment. The period from 1958 to 2008 saw substantial growth in the percentage of spending on this segment, becoming the second favorite item and having the same figure with the travel or transport sector.
In addition, while the proportion of budget spent on housing rose dramatically from 22% to 32% in 2008, European people paid out for entertainment decreased nearly twofold, which took up only 6% at the same time.Turning to the remaining sector, over the five decades ensuing experienced a slight drop by 2% in the percentage of the money was used for clothing.
resident's sum expenditure on goods
The two pie charts compare the percentage of resident's sum expenditure on six categories of goods and services in a European country over two separate years( 1958 and 2008).
Overall, it is evident that the amount of money was allocated for all aspects, except clothing, changing quite significantly over a 50-year period.
it can be seen from the charts, food accounted for the highest proportion of people's spending with 32% in 1958. However, this figure fell considerably to only 12% fifty years later. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at the luxury goods segment. The period from 1958 to 2008 saw substantial growth in the percentage of spending on this segment, becoming the second favorite item and having the same figure with the travel or transport sector.
In addition, while the proportion of budget spent on housing rose dramatically from 22% to 32% in 2008, European people paid out for entertainment decreased nearly twofold, which took up only 6% at the same time.Turning to the remaining sector, over the five decades ensuing experienced a slight drop by 2% in the percentage of the money was used for clothing.
