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titus_saju

Jul 18, 2020

Writing Feedback / The enormous numbers of cars is the cause of a huge number of traffic congestion [3]

@kiaranoble
"Having a car...." - The introduction is a bit wrong , you can rewrite it like this

It is quite evident that the rise in number of vehicles on road have led to massive traffic congestions and problems. To resolve this issue, many sociologists believe that the governmental institutions have to impose heavy tax on privately owned vehicles. This essay discusses the pros and cons of increasing tax on private cars.

titus_saju

Jul 18, 2020

Writing Feedback / The two pie charts illustrate the post academic qualifications of students in Canada [4]

Academic IELTS Writing Task 1

The two pie charts illustrate the post academic qualifications of students in Canada over two sets of age groups holding a degree, 25 to 35 and 45 to 55 respectively. Overall, the number of students aged between 25 -35 were considerably higher than the other group.

To begin, Humanities and nursing have experienced an increase in popularity among the older graduates where nursing rose by 4%. However, the major gain was for engineering, rising from 9% in young to 19% in elder graduates. Social Science and arts remained nearly constant and is the most popular field of study irrespective of the age group.

In contrast, Science, Math's and computers saw an increase in popularity by 8% among the young graduates. Similarly, proportion of students with the study of MBA rose to double, from 3% to 6% between the young and older academicians. Apart from that subjects such as administration, education and other studies fluctuated slightly among the two age groups wherein the difference was ranging between 1% - 5%.

To sum up, there were significantly more young than older graduates in Canada.

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