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maormendel

Oct 28, 2020

Writing Feedback / The proportion of travellers visiting four well-known locations in Brighton UK over 30 years [2]

I would use:
over 30 years instead of over the period of 30 years.

Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that at the beginning of that period, the festival was the attraction having the highest visitors, while the pavilion took a lead at the last year

The proportion of tourists visiting pavilion significantly increased from 1985 to 1990, while visitors' three other locations fell down.

Visitors coming to the art gallery continuously decreased by 7% in the last five years

maormendel

Oct 28, 2020

Undergraduate / SAO - essay task 1 (250 words) "Physics of the Future" by "Michio Kaku" - I enjoyed this reading [2]

PROMPT:

What reading have you enjoyed most in the past year and why?

I wrote this essay for boarding school admission(high-school) but i dont know if it is good or bad or if I need to improve it.

The reading I have enjoyed the most in the past year is "Physics of the Future" by "Michio Kaku". With 300 scientists' help, the writer analyzes the information he has collected and writes in simple words what innovations will change our lives, how they will change them, and when it will happen?

Unlike many future science books I have read that tend to describe innovations on the verge of science fiction, this book shows practical innovations in fields like medicine, AI, and transportation and shows how they can look shortly.

This book completely amazes me. The fantastic discoveries and ideas that can enhance our lifestyle in the future with the simple explanation of how exactly we'll do it made me realize how unique the creativity in every human being and our desire always to move forward. It also shows the power of physics and the resources on Earth.

The only thing that disappointed me in the book is the lack of memory on global warming. In my opinion, this field is so important, and it's sad to see that even in a science book, it was pushed aside and barely mentioned. It reminds me why it's so important for me to work on this issue.

Therefore, the book made me understand how to use the world's laws to initiate, develop, and produce in different fields that can change our lifestyle beautifully. The book broadened my thought line and motivated me to continue researching, learning, develop ideas, and advancing with them.