SwoleMcBro
Nov 20, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2 - Essay about computers' translation - hoping for review [5]
... computershave played play a leading role in providing convenience in various aspects of to life. ... seems time-consuming to many people. From my perspective, significant as the aid ...
To start with, the speedy work merits of translating ... can offer their users a range of merits, however, overshadowed by overshadow the natures ... For instance, travelers who find it ...
... auto-translating software can find their ways toaspired destinations, ... Furthermore, although massive in vocabulary storage, the mechanical voice ... convey aspects of emotions.
... in interpretation which, however, cannot outweigh ... Capitalizing on this miraculous ...
In conclusion, advantageous as ... as assistance not a replacement for ...
A bit abrupt of an ending, maybe instead of this last sentence, dedicate 2 sentences (1 for each point) to reiterate your points. You could wrap this up with an open-ended sentence that prompts your audience to think. Like.... "where translation fails to compare with speech shows what makes learning languages important"....or something like that
The way I answer "to what extent" questions is to acknowledge the opposing argument first before refuting with my argument, for every body paragraph. I make it my rule to keep opposing arguments out of the topic sentences. It's up to you if you want it there, but I think it clouds your argument. I also think emphasizing where your points are with phrases like "Firstly" , "Finally", "To end, " is essay practice, because it seems that your points are so hard to find that you need to show the reader where it is.
... computers
... auto-translating software can find their ways to
... in interpretation which
A bit abrupt of an ending, maybe instead of this last sentence, dedicate 2 sentences (1 for each point) to reiterate your points. You could wrap this up with an open-ended sentence that prompts your audience to think. Like.... "where translation fails to compare with speech shows what makes learning languages important"....or something like that
The way I answer "to what extent" questions is to acknowledge the opposing argument first before refuting with my argument, for every body paragraph. I make it my rule to keep opposing arguments out of the topic sentences. It's up to you if you want it there, but I think it clouds your argument. I also think emphasizing where your points are with phrases like "Firstly" , "Finally", "To end, " is essay practice, because it seems that your points are so hard to find that you need to show the reader where it is.