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Posts by hahasowhat
Name: kumar
Joined: Nov 25, 2020
Last Post: Nov 30, 2020
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hahasowhat   
Nov 30, 2020
Scholarship / Scholarship essay on self reference in third person. (300 words) [5]

@lobodobo
Hi lobodobo. I think one way to make your letter stronger is by explaining how your achievements have helped you rather than just stating them. Also state any dreams you may have to help the global community. This will make you more well rounded and as a person who wants to leave his mark on the world. Explain one instance where you where creative, one where you want to help the global community and maybe three of your academic and leadership success. This will give more structure to your letter.
hahasowhat   
Nov 25, 2020
Writing Feedback / WHY TRADITIONAL CELEBRATIONS ARE IMPORTANT? [4]

@tinanice123
I think you could go into detail in the paras where you are explaining your three points. You can add a few anecdotes to make it sound like your peice.
hahasowhat   
Nov 25, 2020
Undergraduate / Wonderland - The prompt is what is your favorite word and why [3]

Imagination



I have followed Alice down the rabbit hole many times before. The earliest instance was while I was in elementary school. I had grown tired of staying in my room, staring at the ceiling, so instead, I shrunk myself down and walked through a large, rectangular portal. At first, I was temporarily amazed when I landed in a bathtub full of marshmallows. No one else was around me except for a talking Chesire cat I named Imagination. After having a friendly conversation with her, I learnt that she too had chanced upon this door after chasing an invisible rat . Imagination and I instantly bonded and proceeded on our numerous adventures together in Wonderland.

I travelled with her to the Boro Grove, carefully avoiding the perfumed flowers so we wouldn't grow into trees, and the Whispering woods in search of the forget me knot plant I hoped to give my friend, Color the Unicorn, as a birthday present.

These adventures have made me fall in love with Imagination and understand her importance. To me she was in the form of a cat but many others might have met her in different forms such as invisible friends when they were children. Imagination was my friend who added color to the dull perspective of life. Without her, I would not have dreamt of such wonders nor would I have conceptualized a better world I aspire to build. Imagination is the root of my ideas that I someday hope to make realities.
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