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Jun 10, 2021
Writing Feedback / Writing task1, Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 [3]

In the third paragraph:The second message is uncessary or even wrong because the chart depicts information in 2018, while you wrote in 2008. And to be more specific, the chart doesn't show information about the uphill or downhill trends, it just acquires you to compare the number of visitors among nations.

You should use past simple rather than use present simple.